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As the ship left the hanger the droids continued to shoot at the ship. Qui-Gon, the pilot, Maryin, and Panaka stood in the cockpit.
"All our communications are jammed" the pilot said worriedly
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Jar Jar was pushed into the droid hold.
"Now stay here, and keep out of trouble." Said Obi-Wan as he went to join the others in the cockpit. Jar Jar turned to the droids.
"Ello boyos." Jar Jar said to the droids. The droids left to go fix the shields. Two of the droids got blasted off the ship but one of the droids wasn't and managed to restore the shields.
"There's not enough power to get us to Coruscant… the hyperdrive is leaking." Said the pilot
"We'll have to land somewhere to refuel and repair the ship." said Qui-Gon. Maryin and Obi-Wan began to look for a planet.
"Here, master. Tatooine… It's small, out of the way, poor… Trade federation has no presence there." Obi-Wan said.
"How do you know?" asked Panaka as Maryin went to find it on her scanner.
"It's controlled by the Hutts." Said Maryin.
"You can't take her royal highness there! The Hutts are gangsters… If they discovered her…" Panaka said but was cut off by Qui-Gon.
"… It would be no different than if we landed on a system controlled by the Federation. Except the Hutts aren't looking for her, which gives s the advantage." Said Qui-Gon. With that they went to tell the queen their plain.
"…An extremely well put together little droid. Without a doubt, it saved the ship, as well as our lives." Panaka said.
"It is to be commended… what is it's number?" asked the queen.
"R2-D2, your highness." Said Panaka
"Thank you R2-D2." The queen said. Then she turned to one of her handmaidens. "Padme, clean this droid up as best you can. It deserves our gratitude." Padme walked over to the droid but before she left she turned to Maryin who then turned to her father.
"Go with your friend" he said to her. Maryin and Padme went off to clean the droid as the others continued to talk. They clean silently for a while.
"Exquis me. Whosa are yousa?" Jar Jar asked Padme
"I'm Padme." She said. Jar Jar and Padme continued to talk but Maryin wasn't listening till Padme asked
"What about you?" she asked Maryin
"Hu?" asked Maryin
"How did you get here?" Padme asked
"I think you know." Was the only thing she could think to say. It was true though, Padme was the only one who knew why Maryin had decided to become a Jedi.
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"The hyper drive generator is completely gone, master. We'll need a new one"
Obi-Wan said
"That will complicate things." Said Qui-Gon
"Don't let them send any transmissions, and be wary… I sense a disturbance in the Force" Qui-Gon said in a whisper so that only Obi-Wan could hear he.
"Yes I sense it too" Said Obi-Wan. Qui-Gon nodded.
"Maryin are you ready!?" Qui-Gon called up to his daughter.
"Yeah." She said as she walked into the room. She was dressed the same way she normally was. Baggy black pants that went down to her shin. A royal blue shirt that had sleeves down to her wrists but fell off her shoulder. She had a belt that really looked more like corset just shorter and lower down and it connected by a circle in the middle that was 1 inch all around and made out of an elastic that the belt got hooked on to. The belt was black and had a few silver swirls on it.
"Good, let's go." Said Qui-Gon as they left.
"Good luck, Maryin. May the Force be with you." Obi-Wan said to Maryin as stared to leave. She turned to him.
"Goodbye, Ben. May the Force be with you." Maryin said before walking off to join the others.
I'm SOOO sorry this took SOOO long to post. I just got distracted by all this other stuff that's happening. I'm gonna' try really hard to post as much as I can. I hope you guys like the story so far and don't worry I'm going to start explaining thing and use less canon soon.
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