hi,

Did you guys really think I would kill her? She is my favorite character in the whole freakin series! Please do not give me flames anymore. With most of my stories someone has been giving me flames, and I dont like it. you know who u are. anyway heres part 4, and make sure to read my new story, Captured by a Titan!

Percy

Time unfroze.

"NO!" I screamed.

Kronos ripped his scythe out of her stomach and smiled triumphantly. Annabeth curled into a ball, and shivered. Blood poured from her stomach. I uncapped Riptide, and raced over to her, deflecting Kronos scythe as I did.

"Annabeth! Come on, stay with me." I pleaded with her.

Annabeth turned her head to me. "Percy…" she gasped.

"Fight it Annabeth! I know you can do it!" I said fiercely.

She took a breath, and did not move again.

"ANNABETH!" I screamed in despair. I looked at Kronos with pure hatred in my eyes. "BLACKJACK!"

Blackjack swooped down, and grabbed Annabeth by her armor straps. They both sailed into the sky.

I turned back to Kronos. "You are going to pay for that!" I said, gritting my teeth.

Kronos laughed, and raised his scythe. "You're the one who will pay."

I lunged with Riptide, but Kronos caught my strike. "My, my, you are really out of practice." He said

I twisted my sword around, and rolled out of the way as Kronos's scythe struck the asphalt. He swung at me again, but this time I caught his strike and kicked his feet from under him. Kronos fell to the ground. I took Riptide and held it above him and was about to plunge it in his heart when someone grabbed my sword, disarming me. I turned around, and gasped.

Rachel Elizabeth Dare was standing with my sword in her hand. Her green eyes were blazing with hate. "Rachel?" I asked.

Rachel looked at Kronos, and threw it toward him. I turned around, and watched Kronos grasp Riptide. I turned to a window across the street, and watched myself get stabbed with my own blade.

Annabeth

I was dead. I'm sure that I was dead. The only thing that was making me doubtful was because I wasn't in the Underworld, and I heard voices. I was trapped in darkness. I felt people around me, trying to figure out what was wrong. I realized what was happening. I was in a coma.

Kronos

I ripped Jackson's sword out, but there was no hole. Jackson stood up shakily, and smiled. "Wrong spot."

He lunged toward me, and I hit him with the butt of my scythe. Jackson crumpled to the ground.

I turned to Rachel. "Nice job, you did well."

Rachel nodded, looking pleased. She bowed and left the scene.

Percy

I was awake. I didn't pass out, I just pretended. I wanted to see what would happen. Sure enough, Rachel was working for Kronos. I felt betrayed. Annabeth was dead, and Rachel let Kronos try to kill me. I decided to let them know I wasn't out of it, so I stood up, and saw Kronos's back to me. Perfect. I snuck up behind him, and grabbed my sword. I thrust it under his neck.

"I'm invulnerable too, Jackson." Kronos growled.

I moved my sword to Kronos's armpit. It was worth a shot. I closed my eyes, and plunged.

Annabeth

I was panicking. I've heard how coma patients sometimes never wake up. I felt like crying, but I couldn't when I was in endless darkness. I hoped Percy was okay. Wait, Percy. I left him alone! He can't defeat Kronos by himself! Come on Annabeth, fight it!

Percy

"AHHHHHHHHHH" Kronos screamed.

I was right, it was just a lucky guess, but I was right! Kronos fell to the ground, and I pulled my sword out. I stood over him, ready to strike once more. Nobody was going to stop me this time. I looked down at Kronos, who was pinned down. He stared up at me with those golden eyes. It was like they were saying to get on with it. I wasn't sure if it was a trick, but I had to try. I took Riptide, and I plunged it straight through Kronos's heart, killing him instantly.

I stared at Luke's body. I thought about how Kronos had corrupted him. Kronos deserved to die, but did Luke? Sure he tried to kill me and Annabeth countless times, but was killing him really necessary? I pushed those thoughts away. Right now, I had to go see if Annabeth was still alive.

Annabeth

I was hoping that Percy would be okay, but the Fates are cruel. He'd probably be dead right now. A voice broke me of my thought.

"Annabeth, it's me, Percy. We did it! Kronos is defeated! You need to wake up now. I can't lose you." Percy said to me softly.

I fought the darkness. I had to make it back to the world, to Percy. I concentrated with all of my might, and I opened my eyes. I saw Percy in a chair next to the bed I was in, holding my hand.

"Annabeth!" he said as he broke into a grin.

"Percy…" I said, but the darkness pulled me back under.

Percy

Annabeth's eyes shut again. I was so happy she was alive, but I was worried too. I heard people in the hallway muttering something about a coma. I thought comas were supposed to be over as soon as you woke up, but with demigods, it must be different. I looked at Annabeth, with tears threatening to spill from my eyes. She was in a coma because of me. I was going to do everything I could to pull her out of it.

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