Hey guys!
I got the sweetest comment from a guest yesterday. I would like to thank you so much for this comment!
Guest chapter 8 . Dec 1
love this! i think you just as good Rick Riordan
Martharose asked if i could have annabeth and percy make love. To answer your question. I cant. I am only 13. I dont want to be writing like that yet. But I would like to thank Martharose for her support! Enjoy chapter 11!
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Annabeth
For almost an hour now, I've been just staring at Percy's body, cursing the gods. Why could they be so cruel! After all we've been through! Sobs started to rack my body again. "The son of Poseidon's final stand." I muttered. I was going into shock. I couldn't live without Percy. At that thought, I lied down against Percy's body, wishing I could die.
I had a nightmare about Percy dying, and how I was too late to save him. I woke up with a start. My "pillow" had moved. "Wait!" I thought. I sat up immediately, and stared at Percy's body. His chest was moving up and down. "PERCY!" I screamed in relief. Percy's eyes fluttered open. "Annabeth?" he asked. "I'm here!" I gasped. Tears were stinging my eyes, and I let them spill. "What…what happened?" he asked me. "You died! You…You…d…died!" I screamed, as I broke down crying. Percy looked shocked. He tried to get up, but winced in pain, as he realized that there were claw marks across his chest. "Annabeth…" he murmured. I looked up at him. "I'm okay; it's going to be okay! Please stop crying." He told me softly. I nodded, and lied down next to him. The last thing I remembered was Percy's arm around me, and realizing that he wasn't gone, that he was here with me.
I woke up to Piper screaming. She was looking down at me and Percy with a shocked expression on her face. I turned my head toward him, who was looking at Piper with his signature lopsided grin. "You…you were dead!" Piper choked out. "Good to see you too." Percy said, grinning. Piper broke into a smile. Jason raced into the room, with his sword drawn. "Piper! Are you okay? I heard you screaming." Jason said. Jason turned his head to us. His expression turned from shock to happiness. "Annabeth what happened?" Jason asked me. "I don't know. I just woke up to Percy breathing." I said. Jason looked bewildered, and turned to Percy. "I'm going to get some ambrosia for your scratches." He said. "Thanks man." Percy said. Jason turned and walked out of the room, pulling Piper with him.
I sat up and turned to Percy, examining his wounds. As I did so, he managed to sit up, and pull me into his arms. "I'm sorry for what happened." He whispered in my ear. "You don't have to be sorry." I replied. "It wasn't your fault." I pulled away and looked at him. "What happened down there?" I asked. "I don't really know. The only thing I remember is the Nereid's, and when I greeted you." He said. I thought about the ordeal for a moment, wondering what it could've been. Percy made me look at him. "I love you." He said. My heart started to race, and I kissed him. "I love you too." I said as I drew away. He smiled. Before I could say anything else, Percy's eyes rolled up into his head, and he hit the floor.
"Percy?" I said, as I shook him. When there was no response, I checked his breathing. It was slow and shallow. I started to panic. I couldn't lose him again! I was about to go find Jason, when he walked into the room carrying the ambrosia. When he saw the panicked look on my face, he raced over, and gave me the ambrosia. Jason checked Percy's pulse again, as I stuffed the ambrosia square into his mouth. "He's not doing too well." Jason told me. I almost started to cry again, but I held it in. "Annabeth, I need you to speak to him, give him positive thoughts. That might help him pull through." Jason told me. I nodded. I turned toward Percy. "Come on seaweed brain, stay with me." I started in a collective voice, but then I started to break down. "You promised to never leave me again, and I'm still holding you to it! Come on, Percy stay with me!" I started screaming how much I cared about him and how I would not survive if he died etcetera. I started to notice Percy's breathing strengthen. Soon he gasped and opened his eyes. The wounds on his chest started to heal. "Percy!" I said, as I squashed him into a hug. "I…can't breathe!" Percy managed to get out. "Sorry." I said, as I pulled away. He grinned, and sat up. He turned to Jason. "Thanks for the help." He said. "Don't mention it." Jason replied. Just then Leo burst into the room. "Guys! We are almost at Camp! You better get up here." He said. As he left, we made a silent agreement to not tell anyone else about today's events. I grabbed Percy's hand, and together we raced out the door.
Okay, now does me killing percy make sense? I needed to have something horrible happen, and I looked at the prophecy and it struck me! Comment please!