A/N: Ok so this is my first fan fiction and if you didn't read the summary it's basically if instead of staying in Abnegation or transferring to Dauntless, she follows her brother to erudite. I'm not sure yet with Susan and Robert. If you're actually reading this I would love to see what y'all want Susan and Robert to choose. I was thinking maybe Susan stays in Abnegation and Robert transfers to Amity, but like they all stay in touch and stuff happens ;) ? I am not sure if this will be war or no war yet so please give your thoughts on that too, thanks!
Tris (Beatrice) POV
I wake up to the sound of my alarm, and realize it is Choosing Day. I quickly jump out of bed and take a shower. Once I'm dry I put my hair up into the traditional Abnegation bun, then I go downstairs to the rest of my family.
" Good morning Beatrice, we have some toast for you and then we must go to the bus if we hope to be there in time." My mother says to me.
" Of course mom." I reply. This is my faction, selfless as always. Apparently I am divergent and have an aptitude for three different factions: Abnegation, Dauntless, and erudite. I still have no idea what I'll choose. I can't leave my family, but I definitely don't belong here unlike my brother, Caleb. He is the perfect Abnegation, always helping neighbors with groceries, giving his seat on the bus to someone in another faction. It just doesn't come to me as easily as it does to him. I have always known that Caleb will choose Abnegation, but something he said last night, but we have to also think about ourselves. It got me wondering, is Caleb the perfect Abnegation I always thought he was?
Suddenly I'm brought back from my thoughts by a knock on the door, it's Susan and Robert. They are our neighbors and we have practically grown up with them.
" Hello, we were wondering if we could travel with you this morning, our father is sick and we'd like to stick with a group, but don't let us be unwelcome." Susan says to me.
" That would be perfectly fine," I reply, trying to sound happy even though I'm still thinking about what Caleb said and that I don't know what faction I'm going to choose.
" Beatrice, Caleb, we need to leave now if we're going to make the bus." My father calls. Both of us are already at the door making small talk with Susan and Robert. Caleb, Susan, Robert, and I are all shaking as we walk to the bus, knowing that we are about to make the biggest decision of our lives.