A/N: So I got a review and so now I'm going to, when I can, do long chapters. I hope I'm not an awful writer, but if I am constructive criticism is very welcome. Also please review they're very welcome.

TheFaultInOurDivergentGames: Thanks for the review! As I just said I will try longer chapters.

Sorry and now to the story...

Susan POV

Beatrice and Caleb both Erudite! I mean yeah Beatrice I knew she wouldn't stay but Caleb, how?! I have no idea what I'm going to choose now. I was going to stay in Abnegation because that was my aptitude but what do I do now! I can't be in Erudite I'm just not smart enough, and if i stayed in Abnegation I would never get to see Caleb because of the "no Abnegation" rule. I sigh to myself. Amity? No too happy and they hug people, and live out of the fence. I wouldn't get to see Caleb, oh Caleb... We started hanging out a lot and then study sessions became make-out sessions... But I need to focus, what faction? Candor? I can't be that honest and I've heard you have to spill all your secrets to the entire faction. So that leaves...Dauntless! I can't make it there, or can I?

Tris POV

I shakily walk off stage to go stand with my brother behind the Erudite.

" Hey Beatrice it's ok," He says noticing my shakiness, " sometimes you have to think about yourself."

" I know," I say, " I just can't believe my hand went to Erudite."

" What did you want it to go to?"

" I have no idea."

" Well you're in Erudite now, so shut up I wanna see where this stiff goeswithout being distracted!" I voice calls from in front of us. We quiet down, and see Susan on the stage. She cuts her hand with the knife, she moves her hand towards the Abnegation bowl, but at the last second jerks to...Dauntless! She chose Dauntless! But she's just like my brother so easily selfless, well at least I thought he was. As the Dauntless erupt into cheers and hoot and holler in joy, the rest of the crowd gasps. I realize I missed Robert and by the looks on the faces of my former faction I know he must have transferred, but where to? As I look around I realize I am not tall enough to see over everyone else. So I decide to improvise by asking Caleb if I can climb up on his shoulders.

He says yes, but is still a little confused as I climb up onto his shoulders. Once I'm sitting on his shoulders I look at all the different pools of initiates. Dauntless, no he's not there but I do see Susan. Abnegation, no, I already ruled that out but check anyway. Erudite, no, not here I would have seen him by now. Candor, no, so that leaves, Amity. Sure enough I can see bland grey Abnegation clothes like a sore thumb in the throng of yellow and red.

" What do you think they'll do now that we're all gone?" Caleb asks, talking about our and Susan and Robert's parents.

" I don't know," I say, " I really don't know. I climb off of Caleb's shoulders and don't even try to listen to the end of the ceremony, all I can think is what will happen to my parents.

Susan POV

I don't what made me choose Dauntless, I know I can't fit in. My apptitude was Abnegation but I wouldn't get to see Caleb and the Dauntless are free, reckless, but free. That means that after initiation I'll be a full member and I may be able to go visit from time to time, but for that to happen I need to do one thing and that is to pass. I don't even know what their initiation is like, but I guess i'll find out eventually, although i've heard talk that it's ruthless.

I'm awakened from my thoughts by an Amity kid shaking me. " Hey we're leaving!" He yells as he starts to walk after the others, well when I say walk, I mean run. We run down the stairs, and outside. By the time we make it outside I'm panting and sweating buckets. I decide to take off my Abnegation jacket to reveal a plain grey t-shirt.

" Ohhhhhhh Scandalous!" I hear someone say when I climb to the train tracks. When I get to the top I realize we are going to have to jump on the train. I can't jump on a train! There is no way I mean just how? But I have no more time to think because suddenly I hear the train whistle. Damn! I think to myself. Now what am I supposed to do?

One of the members can see my worry and says, " Don't jump you're to the factionless kid." Ad that right there makes my decision for me, when the train comes I run along it with everyone else and jump.