You guys I have 20 reviews! That is 5 more than I hoped for! Ok special shoutout to: Tabi230, Kathryn Daughter Of Hestia and Kfromcabin6 for reviewing chapter 4 in my story and you guys are awesome! Anyway I guess I should do the disclaimer.
Disclaimer: All rights and characters go to Rick Riordan and I don't own Walmart, Forever 21 or MacDonald's
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"Ahhhhh!" screamed Leo as he fell (tied up) from the top of Forever 21. "Someone catch me!"
Fortunately Nico lunged forward and caught Leo as Annabeth ran out, unfortunately Nico was still weak from his shadow travel and he was off balance so he fell backwards on top of Annabeth who dodged and him and the son Hades hit his head on the pavement.
"Ow!" complained Leo
"Oooowww!" moaned Nico getting up and rubbing his head
"Leo!" Annabeth scolded "We leave you alone for a few minutes and you get yourself into trouble!"
"Yah," responded Leo "I'm gifted that way but I escaped and didn't die, which is good."
"Oh my gods! Nico are you alright!" said Hazel rushing towards him "Is your head okay? Do you need ice? Can you get up? Does it hurt?"
"HELLO! I was just kidnapped, tied up and I fell of a roof! I need help!" complained Leo
"Yah we'll help repair boy, just wait" said Piper walking out with 5 shopping bags and sunglasses. "Also we should go home it's getting kind of dark."
"Hey can I tag along?" asked Rachel "I need a ride."
"Sure," answered Annabeth while she started to untie Leo.
"Oohh! Oohh! Can we go eat!" asked Leo "Please! I'm starving!" Leo's stomach growled in agreement
"Well I'm sort of hungry too, and Nico needs to eat something so… Ok." Answered Annabeth
"Where should we go?" asked Annabeth driving through traffic
"A place with food," said Leo
"Well duh, but what place." Answered Piper rolling her eyes
"Well I haven't had pizza in a while," put in Rachel
"I know Domino's pizza!" said Hazel
"I think Little Caesar's is better," added Leo
"No Domino's,"
"Little Caesar's"
"Domino's!"
"Little Caesar's!"
"How about burgers?" cut in Nico "You know, McDonald's, up ahead, on our right."
"That sounds good let's go!" exclaimed Piper as Annabeth pulled up into the parking lot and they walked out.
"We'll have 3 happy meals-" ordered Annabeth
"8 happy meals," interrupted Nico
"Ok 8 happy meals," said Annabeth while Piper looked at Nico weirdly "3 big macs and 1 large fries"
"And a salad!" added Piper quickly "No chicken or dressing, please" The lady at the counter moved on to the next customers and everyone left to find a table.
"Nico, why did you need 5 extra happy meals?" asked Hazel
"Listen I know people say you need to eat more but isn't this a bit extreme?" asked Leo and Rachel smiled.
"The happy meals aren't for him," explained Annabeth
"Then who are they for?" asked Piper and Leo in unison.
"They're for-" answered Rachel pausing dramatically then gesturing at Nico
"Talking to the ghosts of the dead." Finished Nico bluntly. Leo's stomach did a slow roll as he processed this.
"Oh." Answered Hazel nodding
"So dead people… That's… ummm… an interesting hobby…?" responded Leo "Sooo… I'm gonna see if our food is ready." Ok, talking to dead people why not? Completely normal… Does Hazel talk to dead people? I don't want to know. Leo thought as he walked to the counter.
"Ow!" said a little girl he had run into while thinking to himself "Watch where you're going… you're the guy who threw up at Walmart!"
"And you're the girl who dropped your tiara." Said Leo "Why are you here!"
"It's MacDonald's, we're eating here." She responded
"Oh my gods! You look like Nico!" He screamed "That's why you look familiar! What's your name?" She took a step back.
"I'm not supposed to talk to strangers!" then she ran off to the Play Place.
"Wait! You need to meet-"
"Your food is ready," said a guy at the counter
"Oh! Uh, thanks." And Leo ran back to the table.
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