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Mistykit looked over too her brother, who's fur was freshly groomed, with fur slick. When she looked at her own slick blue gray pelt she saw it too was shimmering in the moons light. she and her brother were about to be made apprentices, and both were ready too burst with excitement. she was nervously about her pelt when Stonekit interrupted her thoughts,' I wonder who our new mentors will be? I want Stoneclaw he is loyal, strong, and he even has a since of amusement, or splashwing she's nice, kind, and she is a wonderful hunter, she always comes back with tons of prey in her jaws!", meowed Stonekit, just then Mistykit wondered, who WILL be our mentors?' just then she decided on a few good choices, I would like, Splashwing too I think, or maybe Stormtooth he is loyal, strong, and a great hunter, plus he is funny. Mistykit meowed in return. Just then she heard Reedstars call,' All cats old enough too swim gather under the rock cliff for a clan meeting!,' his voice boomed over the clearing like thunder In a storm, he then meowed,' Mistykit, Stonekit, please step forward, today you shall be made to apprentices.', ' Mistykit please step forward, from this day on until you receive your warrior name you will be known as Mistypaw your mentor will be, Stormtooth,'. Mistypaw now she thought too herself as she touched her nose too her mentors. she then sat back too watch her brothers ceremony, she saw that in the end he got Splashwing for a mentor. A moment after the ceremony Mistypaw got a sharp pain in the belly and she realized she had been too nervous too eat so she went to the fresh kill pile and selected a large pike' she picked it up in-between her teeth and settled down too eat under a near bye holly bush when Riverpaw approached her she immediately offered too share her pike with her best friend " sure, thanks, hey congratulations on your new position. after eating you want to go to the lake on a walk with me?,' he asked Mistypaw. Mistypaw felt nervousness knag at her belly as she answered 'of course', too the young apprentice and almost immediately felt the nerves of being their the first time . They finished their pike quickly in silence. As soon as the last bite was eaten the pair walked out into the forest on their way too the lake. But almost immediately Mistypaw realized she had never left the camp before this and was no where near sure of where she would be heading and in a hushed and hurried whisper she told Riverpaw, ,' I have never left camp before!", his only response was,' just walk next to me I will help you don't worry,.' Almost as if on queue Mistypaw felt a strange feeling wash over her she just pushed it all away.
it is gonna be awhile before I update possibly I am ssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry! please don't kill me!