Brother Wolf, Let me in

by spape

A cross-over story not in line with the TV show plots with new characters:When Caroline Forbes decides its time to explore the possibility of a relationship with Klaus,she comes to New Orleans only to be met with secrets and a new darkness which threatens to tear apart the Original family and the love that Klaus and Caroline so desperately want. Can they triumph? My 1st fan-fiction

5. Chapter 5

A/N Sorry to interrupt the flow and it's only a quick question but for those who have read so far I don't suppose you could let me know if there's anything I need to improve on or get better or, conversely, anything you like about it? Equally, if you have any suggestions for which way you would like the storyline to flow - that would be great.

*Spoiler Alert: I'm thinking maybe set up a Damon/Stefan -esque rivalry between Wallace and Klaus for Carolines' affection with the added bonus of developing Caroline into a super vamp with a sire bond courtesy of Wallaces' demon blood following a Coven show down when she's injured. Also, ambitious, I know but maybe adding a bit more development subplot wise with Elijah and Hayley. If anyone remembers Poldark then the saga feel once Klaroine have become an official couple could be an idea for future storylines.*

Again, disclaimer time: I have no remote connection with, nor rights to the characters of either The Vampire Diaries or The Originals. Any work developed remains the work of the author. Just a huge Fan really.

I haven't watched the 5th series yet and I'm a massively novice writer (just a keen reader really) so any review/comment would be greatly encouraged.

Thanks, and I'll always root for Klaroline. Sigh. Ps, yup, my grammar is hit and miss but that's because my Alpha male is my Beta and fits in the spell check/ grammar duty as and when.

Susie P