I am working on a story and have done the first chapter but I am not very confident about its plot so if anyone wants to help me by reading it personally it would be very helpful. Just pm me or review as I feel the story could be interesting but if it would be worth it that I am not sure of.
Your help will be a blessing
Summer noon
The Sun was blazing in the mid-sky, the air was warm, the city was garnished with the contrasting bright sunshine and dark shadows. It was one of those summer noons when both Misaki and Akihiko were at home.
They had their lunch and were resting in the room.
Misaki looked at his lover sitting on the couch and smoking and couldn't suppress the urge to start a conversation
'Usagi-san what do you usually do during the summer noon?'
Akihiko stayed quite unable to reply the exact routine. It took him some time to discover the truth while Misaki watched him with innocent eyes.
'I spent it with you or thinking of you.'
Misaki controlled his irritation at the obvious answer and asked again.
'What about when I wasn't with you?'
'I don't have anything to remember of those times; even if I do they are not worth it.'
Misaki listened but couldn't say anything.
'Misaki, the days that I have spent without you are deleted from my life.'
They didn't speak much and Misaki didn't protest when Akihiko came and patted his hair slowly……
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I love summer so you can expect more of this kind of stories.
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