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I wipe the tears from my eyes and as I do I see the light start to fade from her eyes and then she's gone. I didn't even get to say goodbye I couldn't bring the words to my lips. I look up and he's still standing there holding the dagger that I gave to him during Luke's moment of clarity. It's still dripping with Annabeth's blood. There's a smirk on his face his eyes that infuriating gold and so I'm filled with righteous fury and all I want to do is... break... him. I can feel it now the tremors below us getting stronger and stronger this air surrounding us nearing hurricane force winds. He can feel it to the smirk is gone from his face. I can feel myself burning out my body not meant to be able to hold this much power inside of it. I don't care all that matters is that I kill him. Lava erupts from the concrete and I start to gather the winds and lava around myself straining to keep control less I burn myself out before my work is complete. I start floating from the sheer amount of power I'm channelling. I cant hold it back anymore and so I let It go and pour everything I have I have into it. With a primal scream of pain and rage I burn out into a supernova of pure power blasting kronos to pieces... and then everything goes dark and I'm at peace and Annabeth's waiting for me. I run to her and sweep her up into my arms.