Before we start with this story… What the hell happened to TDΔD? To put it simply:
Way too hard to upkeep it. It was my first fan fiction, and I thought that I could throw everything to the wall to see what stuck. WRONG. The following things happened because of that mistake:
The story was far too rushed. 1.2K per chapter was too little, especially with how the story was structured. I was thinking too much about what happened in the later chapters instead of focusing on the current ones.
There are too many characters to manage. I only properly made a chapter for just a few groups, and the others got far too little.
By running through the story, I noticed I didn't quite go with a fixed plan. So things ended up getting quite confusing the more time passed.
So out of that way, it was a flop. But it was a first attempt, so here is another story that should be much easier to manage!
Warning: Contains Spoilers from the new seasons. I've watched enough of it quite a few times, and I've grasped the characters enough to understand most of them. The 2nd season at this point isn't out yet, so characters will be able to tell more of themselves later…
Also shout-out and thanks to V.I.S.I.O.N-K.I.N.G Total Drama Mutant Mayhem for the inspiration! This story doesn't contain mutation unlike that story though.
Allegedly.
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Ok, it doesn't. It's something different though.
TOTAL DRAMA- Σ DIMENSION- PROLOGUE
The scene opens to a dark and gloomy hall, placed in a hexagonal layout. The hall is mostly made of stone and marble, and it contains mysterious carvings places all around the walls, which lack windows. The lights of the hall turn on, showing an intense yellow hue. The columns are black, with a yellow light that gleams through squared lines. The floor was made of tiles, which constantly changed to different shades of yellow. The ceiling has yellow steel beams that support the place and the center leads to a peculiar big chandelier that has hexagonal-shaped glass and some string lights. The quiet, mystical silence that spreads through the place gets suddenly interrupted as soon two glows with some polygonal sparkles appear close to the center of the room.
A young woman with brown skin and dark brown hair fell from the first glow. She wears orange shoes, blue pair of jeans and a light blue T-shirt with some white embroidery. She also has a hair clip and a pair of earrings. She screams as she falls to the floor, but she lands right. She is Priya, a finalist in the Total Drama reboot.
"Ugh… What is this place? Is this the place of the new season?" She notices the glowing light, thinking she came from there, which started to fade away. She then sees the light next to them, which was about to spew someone else out. "Look out!"
Someone came out of the portal. He is a tall young man who has dark skin and short blonde hair. He has black shoes, green trousers, a lavender shirt, and a purple vest. He also has 2 pairs of green bracelets, a necklace, and some ear piercings. He also lands cleanly on the floor, which changed to a more orange color as he stands on it. He's Bowie.
"Oh. Hi Priya!" He looked around the room, seeing it in full glory. "This place looks cool, but… it doesn't feel like Chris. At all. Besides, look at how many hexagons there are here!"
"You're right…" Priya replied, looking at the color-changing floor. "But look at the floor! It's fun to play with it." Bowie just nodded. "It looks like there is no way out of this place…"
Just as he says that a dodecahedron glowed up in the center of the room.
"Oh. Are we in a video game? It feels like one." Bowie raised an eyebrow. "It's probably one of those "Key Items" we need to game.
"Now that you said it, yeah. Huh." The two walk toward the polygon. Priya picks it, but nothing happens. "It did light up. Hello?" She shakes it, but nothing still happens. "Ok, now we're stuck in this place forever. I want to go HOME to set up another date with-" Bowie was worried, but as soon he said HOME the shape duplicated into two and the one holding it showed up a message.
CONGRATULATIONS!
You figured out how the dodecahedron works!
You activate it by saying "HOME"
This includes the scenario where you lost your shape. Just say the word, and it will appear.
For more info, please refer to the "TUTORIAL" Section after this message.
To select, just tap one side of the polyhedron.
[↓]
"Great. It is a game." Bowie looked unimpressed.
"It could be fun! That's what are games for." Priya told him, who looked a bit excited.
"There is just the TUTORIAL section." Bowie looked at the screen.
MAIN MENU
→[TUTORIAL]←
CLOSE
More selections will be unlocked later!
As Bowie selected, another screen showed up.
WELCOME TO THE Σ DIMENSION!
The quest now is simple.
SAVE YOUR FRIENDS.
Or at least, your campmates.
There are at least 14 levels, plus 1 bonus level.
They are each placed at the end of a level, inside a floating cage.
Don't worry, they are fed well enough!
Or at least We hope so.
Each level is different from each other, and each level is divided into three parts.
For more info, more tutorials will come out later!
[↓]
"This isn't helpful." Bowie disappointedly says.
"Great! Now how do we save somebody?" Priya asked herself. "Looks like we've got a quest before next season begins!"
"Wait, so the others are here? We have to save everyone?" Bowie just realized the implications. "Ew, we have to save her too," Bowie said with a disgusted face. "If we save everyone we get out of here then."
"Hey! Who are referring to?" Priya was looking at Bowie with an annoyed face.
"Look! Here is the start button." Bowie completely ignored her.
MAIN MENU
→[START]←
TUTORIAL
CLOSE
More selections will be unlocked later!
Bowie hesitated a little before tapping the shape.
"Come on! We have to save everyone!" Priya took the dodecahedron and as soon as she tapped, most of the lights turn off. The only lights on were blue and were from the pillars and the tiles the duo was standing on.
"Oh. Did I break something?" Priya got a little worried. A hexagonal pillar comes out and shows a big hologram.
"It doesn't seem so. Look." Bowie points to the screen.
LEVELS
→[1- MILLIE-ON WAYS NOT TO DIE]←
2-?
3-?
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"This joke is horrible." Bowie was getting annoyed. "Who the hell created this place?"
As soon as he says that he gets hit by a falling object. It disappears as it hits Bowie.
"HEY! That wasn't funny! There must be someone looking at us." Bowie was scratching his head.
"Let's waste no time! Here we go Millie, I'm here to save you."
When she tapped her shape, every single light goes off, and a strong, blinding light covers the hall.
Bowie: [gasp]
Where are we? Wait, we're flying!
Wait. I feel so strange, something changed but what?
The duo is floating in a strange void. Mostly white, but has some colors moving above them.
Priya: I don't care!
This is so exciting! Over there!
-LEVEL 1-
MILLIE-ON WAYS NOT TO DIE
Bowie: Looks like we have to get ready! Go!
Priya: Woo-Hoo!
Looks like a long adventure is beginning. They exit the void and were about to enter a forest.
[INTRO]
I can tell you what it's all about if you want to be free.
You're standing in the shadow, I'm wondering why.
You're in the dark.
And you'll go fighting harder, harder now.
You want someone by your side. (Oh really?)
Just fight to the end to gain the freedom, freedom you want back. (What's this all about?)
Come and take it, I can show you how it's done.
Come and take it when no one is around.
Come and take it, I can show you how it's done.
You'll be lost and You'll be found... (Have you ever thought about it?)
(We go to fight and there is no way back.)
We'll be lost and we'll be found… (Have you ever thought about it?)
(We go to fight and there is no way back.)
And there is no way back. (No way back.)
Have you ever thought about it?
You go to fight and there is no way back.
No way back.
Have you ever thought about it?
You go to fight and there is no way back.
No way back.
Millie: Hello?
Is someone here? Priya?
Please, SOMEONE! Help me!
Millie shakes the cage bars. It does nothing.
.
.
[CONTINUES…]
And that's about it! Please give any suggestions in the reviews on how I could make this better. If you want to ask any question regarding the lore, it will gradually come out with the chapters.
This time, I want to complete a story! Note that this chapter is intentionally short. Following chapters should be MUCH longer. There is nothing to work around with just two characters.
Is this related to my 1st attempt at a story? You'll find out sooner or later.
Delta's OUT!