Kirby: Return of the Destroyer

by Guardians of Time

with their victory, has magalor really been defeated? what would happen if they all came to Equestria? (note this is my first fan fic so pls read and help me pls)

8. Authors Note

Authors note

Ok seriously, I need ideas or at least just more reviews ok? I'm not making any more chapters until I get some more reviews, or better yet, ideas. Btw, my OCs is coming up next chapter.

And again, someone reviewed to me that this is a ripoff, well i going to point it out again, I AM JUST GETTING IDEAS FROM PEOPLE AND JUST PUTTING IT INTO MY STORY, and i also have help writing this,(cause i am new to writing story's) besides, some of my friends give ideas on what to put in a chapter too, 1 actually wrote a whole chapter for me, so if some of the things are ripped off, then sorry, the people helping me might have ripped it off and used the ripped off stuff to help me, and some might be just out of coincidence,(more likely the first one). but i am NOT taking the chapters I have already down. oh, and if you want your OCs in my story, review it to me. but it MUST be a pony and you must give me a full description of it(like appearance, origin, personality and so on so forth)

thx and KEEP REVIEWING!

P.S. : from now on i will take a little more time to post for some chapters, i now a working on a new series on YouTube on MineCraft. So i will be switching from YouTube filming to writing ok? BTW i decided to start again maybe thursday or on thanksgiving, it depends, but i will be using thanksgiving to only work on chapters.