Author's note :: I was just reading over my chapters and they suck! I need some criticism you guys! Otherwise the story won't change. And it will stay lame. BLEH lol.
This is where the story gets rated M, but just for this chapter...'For now... There will be more ;]
So for fair warning. This chapter is rated M. enjoyyy.
P.s :: I usually use a song in the story to name of the chapter, but instead I used a crucial line in the story to name this chapter. Hint ;]
Chapter 5 :: Te Amo
Logan (POV) ::
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Our lips met... and I greeted his mouth with a warm soft embrace from my own. Is this what it feels like? I was expecting the clichéd electrical feeling when kissing someone... But I didn't get it... Instead I felt something more palpable. No electricity or fire, but and drop and a loss. When my lips met his, my stomach dropped and felt completely empty.. And my heart... Instead of my heart racing. It completely stopped. Not a pump. Not a beat. It was exciting, yet scary... I didn't know what to think of it, until that rush came. The pit in my stomach furled and morphed into what can only be described as a thousand butterflies wings fluttering, lining every inch of my tummy. I swear it almost tickled. My heart suddenly jump started and began to hurriedly pump in an attempt to make up for the loss of blood flow for the few seconds that our lips were touching. I leaned away from the kiss and opened my eyes, only to find Carlos staring back at me. Oh no..
What have I done?... I have to apologize..
"Oh my god. I-i-i-i'm so sorry Carlos, i-i-i don't know what came over m-" but I didn't get to finish because Carlos grabbed my face and closed the distance between us and kissed me hard on the lips. This time with passion. He started to kiss me over and over again. It soon turned into a mad make out session and I kissed him back with vigor clearly showing that I wanted something. Sensing the tension between us we stumbled off the seat, effectively knocking over the white bench. There was so much force. So much heat. He pinned me up to the wall still kissing me madly on the lips. This went on for a good 4min before I got restless. I took control this time and pushed myself from the wall still holding on to his chiseled face. I started leading him to the bed while kissing him and struggling with my shirt. On our way, we bumped into the glass table and hit the wall a couple of times causing some of the frames to drop to the floor, cracking the glass frame a bit, but I didn't care. They could easily be replaced and I wasn't letting go of this moment for dear life. Finally we reached the edge of the bed and we took off each other's shirts before I pushed him on the bed right away and pounced on top of him. I crawled over him and kissed him hungrily, greedingly wanting more. I straddled my legs under his hips and started kissing his neck and licking at the hot spots on his neck. I did this for a good while, switching to both sides of his neck to be fair to his neck. But in a sudden whirl and a blur of vision, Carlos had spun us in a 180' and had me gently land on my back with him straddling me and him on top. I looked at his face and he looked into mine. He looked different. Stronger, instinctual, feral even. He looked like an animal and my heart raced even faster than before. So this is heat? The electricity... MORE...
Carlos lunged for my neck and savagely starting sucking on it. I knew he was going to leave marks. BIG ONES. But I didn't care. I WANT THEM. I even started biting me and as much as it started to hurt, I didn't want him to stop. The pain escalated my pleasure and gave a new layer to what I was feeling. So dug my nails into his back. Carlos reeled his head and neck back and growled at the pain I was causing him. He enjoyed it... His animal instincts got the better of him and he took it a step further. After making another lunge for my neck I heard him snarl in my ear a bit while he was sucking on my Adams apple. He slowly made his way down my neck to my collar bone and to my left pec. His tongue began to massage my nipple and it felt incredible. My skin was so sensitive there and I reflexively cradled his head. Feeling the warmth coming from his head it warmed up my arms and sent shivers down my half naked body. Somewhere in the time of making our way to my bed we must have removed our shoes and socks which left out feet bare. I let his feet play with mine as his tongue was playing with my nipple. His tongue expertly made circles he gently nibbled on the tip of it and made me give a groan. Fuuuuuuck.. he looked up at my remark and reacted in a way most pleasurable. He violently kissed his way down to my abs with his hand on my other nipple and started squeezing it. He dragged his tongue over the each row of bumps of my abs. Eventually he just started licking them all together.. Carlos took his hands off my chest and set them on my pants. He kissed the lining of where my pants began and skin ended. He started undoing my pants, but stopped and looked at me as if asking for approval. I nodded a yes and breathlessly managed to let out "please.. keep going." And he did just that. Starting right where he left off. He kissed the border of my pants and skin and continued to undo my belt. Once it was unlatched he unbuttoned then unzipped my pants using only his teeth. With both hands he grabbed both sides of my pants and slowly pulled each side down. He got up and backed up a bit in order to take of my jeans, but leaving my boxers on. He got off the bed and stripped down to his boxers and crawled back on the bed and took off right where stopped. Carlos grabbed both my thighs and pulled me closer. He leaned down to kiss me and looked into my eyes. His eyes... SO beautiful. I want to wake up to those everyday for the rest of my life.
"Are you sure?" he asked...
"I'm sure about you" I said...
He smiled..
And with that he went back down to where the heat was building. Brought his whole face down to my groin and took in a few large inhales and told me it was intoxicating. That only turned me on even more, which I didn't think was possible at this point. I had a raging hard on and he knew it. He inhaled one more time and grabbed my cock. He slid his hands over the whole thing and slowly jacked me off from my boxers.
"Yessss" I moaned out loud.
He pulled my boxers down and began to lick my cock. His wet tongue gliding over the base and shaft causing me to moan in ecstasy. He grabbed my 8inch cock and started sucking on the tip of my dick. I watched him lick the silver drops coming from my hard dick and started sucking my head trying to get more to come out. Instead he took it all in. Without gagging he took in my whole cock and I reeled my head my back and practically screamed. I started to whine and whimper from how good it felt. I could feel my dick in his throat and he loved it. And so did I. He pulled it half way out and started to give the other hall a hand job while still sucking on my raging cock. I was close to cumming, but I wasn't ready to just yet. I pulled his head to get to come to me. He did so and I kissed him even more. I pulled back and said.
"It's my turn."
I slowly switched positions and laid directly on top of him. I wanted every inch of my skin to be with his. I felt his bulge of love on mine and started to grind in place. I heard him moan a bit so I went down on him. I pulled out his cock through the boxer hole and gulped at what I saw. It had to be 9.5inches. It was a monster!...And it turned me on.. I want that in me... being patient. I started massaging his cock and licked and kissed everywhere on his monster cock. The front back, top-bottom everywhere. I flailed my tongue over his dick head and sucked really hard. He thrusted his pelvis forward and I looked up. His breathing grew increasingly fierce. I could see his chest violently undulating up and down and seeing his face in pure pleasure and him biting his lip. I took in as much as I could, but it was just too big. I got most of it down my throat. He started throat fucking me and I gagged a bit every time my face hit the base of it. I could taste his cum on my tongue. It was extremely salty. Like a good steak and I was craving his meat. I let him do this for 10min until I wanted to see and hear him scream. I took his cock out of my mouth and spit on it. Giving enough spit lube I started jacking him off kissing his thighs, licking them from the bottom up. He moaned a bit more, but it wasn't enough. So I let him breathe a bit before starting again. I backed up a bit on the bed laying on my stomach. I grabbed both his thighs and very very VERY, slowly licked his balls.
"oooooh FUUUCK!" Carlos screamed.
"OH MY... LOGAN.. OHH GOD... DON'T STOP PLEASE DON'T STOP" he moaned.
This was music to my ears. So I kept going. Licked them more and more and more. Each lick making Carlos whine with pleasure. He kept repeating the words fuck and yes over and over and it was exactly what I wanted to hear. "Come here" he said. I looked up and crawled up to him. He grabbed my face once again and started another make out session. It went on for another 10min before I couldn't resist it any longer.
"Fuck me", I said.
He smiled and jumped off the bed. He leaned down to grab his pants and pulled out a condom from his wallet. While he was doing this I turned to the night stand and pulled out some lube from the drawer. I set it on the night stand and turned around. He handed me the condom and told me,
"There's one more thing I want to do." he had a crooked smile and said " It's my turn to make you scream "
I set the condom down next to the lube and thought about what he meant, when he suddenly grabbed my legs and pulled me closer to the side of the bed. He was kneeling down on the rug and lifted up my legs. I was trying to figure out what he was gonna do, when I didn't to anymore. Instead I felt it. He stared eating out my asshole. And it was nothing like I felt before. He was flailing his tongue on and around my asshole. Everything he did make me scream. Every lick and kiss on my ass hole. Made me scream.
"OH FUCK.. CARLOs, FUCK!" I was out of breath, it felt so good.
"I wanna see that cute little asshole." he said menacingly. His dirty talking made me hotter for him and it made me remember his huge dick and how I wanted it, but decided to let him go to town on my hole for just a bit longer. After a good 15min of heaven, I practically yelled at him.
"FUCK ME NOW!"
"That's what I wanted to hear." and with that he grabbed the lube and squirted some onto his hands and started rubbing it around to warm it up. He lubed up my asshole and kissed me in the process.. I was so ready for this.
He slid in a finger and let it go in and out. No big deal. Then he slid another in, I could feel it and he went deeper. This feels good. Then, he slid the third one in. This hurt somewhat and I kinda hissed at it. He said its okay just relax. And I did. Eventually I got used to it and he got and worriedly looked at me.
"Are you sure Logan?"
"I already told you... I'm sure, about, YOU" was all I had to say.
He grinned.
He tore the condom wrapper and put the condom over his dick. Magnum size.. fuuuckkk meeeeee, I thought..
He slowly started to push it in, sliding his head in first. It stung, but it wasn't that bad.
When I told him to go some more. He slid in an inch. OOOKAAYY, now I can REALLLLLY FEEL IT. This started to hurt a lot more. He saw my reaction and kissed my legs and said not worry. I relaxed and let him put more in.
Before I knew it was completely in. I WAS READY.
Carlos started to go out and come back in. Verrrrry slowly as to make sure to not hurt me. But I was ready for him. He started to go faster. And faster. Then suddenly he hit it. That spot that I read on the internet. If he hits it, you'll know. And I KNOW. Carlos really started to fuck me now. Carlos had slipped into his feral state again and was tearing up my ass. Every pound that his my ass made me cry out for more.
"FUCK ME HARDER, FUCK ME HARDER, FUCK MEEE!"
He growled out loudly like an angry bear and was REALLY tearing me up this time. It was unreal how hard and fast he pounding my cheeks. I could hear the slapping and loved it. He kept fucking me over and over each time running over my spot. I was gonna come.
"I'm gonna cum" I said exasperated. I jacked myself off while he kept fucking me. I could feel the volcano that was my cock build up more more and rise to the top before It let loose. I came all over my chest and some even shot past my head towards the pillows. Carlos dramatically slowed down and just pulled out all together. He took off the condom and started rubbing himself off.
"I'm gonna cum" he said and right after he said a HUGE spray of jizz landed on my chest and on my dick. His kneels started to buckle, but he caught himself and finished. I turned to the night stand for a towel I had left there from this morning's shower and used it to wipe all the cum off my body. After that he laid down right next me with a leg and arm over me and started kissing my cheek. It was cold and could start to feel goose-bumps on Carlos' bare skin.
"Come on" I said.
And crawled up to the top and knocked most of the pillows down on the floor and we slid under the sheets. I moved to lie on top of him; still naked. We stared at each other still breathing heavily after what just happened...
Still staring I had to speak what was on my mind..
"So what happens now?." I asked, worried.. Afraid that he would tell me what this was just a fling...
He looked at me and smiled a big goofy grin and simply said "Te Amo"
I knew enough from living in Texas to know what that meant.
All the relief poured out of my body and I laid my head down on his chest. Listening to his heart beat, I wanted nothing more to mold our hearts as one.. I lied there beginning to fall asleep... he kissed my head and rubbed my back a little, before started drifting off.. Before he did, I replied to his comment earlier...
"Te Amo Carlos..."...
AUTHOR'S NOTE :: =3 btw, the song I was wanting to use was actually called Te Amo, but I couldn't really think of how to slip it in the story line. For those who are curious, the song was 'Te Amo by Rihanna'. Awesome song.
