Tanks to those who reveiewed my story and thanks, I know they dont wear cloths but hey I thought I'ed just name by their signitur colours but like I said thanks. It big to me that you like it :)

In this part the hawk comes but it changes, If the chapters arnt named or is 'sorry' am still learning :s. Here we go..


Chapter 2: The unexspected

The Chipmunks was just 10 feet away fromt their home.

The bird cicled above and then quick as a flash, it swooshed down aiming for them. It soon alerted the chipmunks.

Alvin and Simon caught sight of it just in time and ducked but unlucky for Theodore, he was too late. The hawke grabbed him with its clawed feet and lifted him off the ground and into the sky.

Alvin and Simon ran after him as fast as they could, as they ran Alvin got an idea as he looked at the tall tree up ahead so he picked up speed and headed for it, Simon wasn't far behind...

"Alvin what are you doing!" he shouted as he watched Alvin climb the tree.

"savin Theodore...evan if it means killing myself" he shouted back,

Simon looked in horror as Alvin climbed to the top, he was a few feet in front of the hawke as it came closer with the scared little chipmunk in its claws.

As Alvin waited, he got into position, bending his legs and showing his claws. He was gonna pounce any minute...

"god someone save me if i don't make it" Alvin prayed, he looked at his brother who was just running past " SIMON GET READY TO CATCH THEO" he shouted

Simon nodded as he kept running, The bird reached the point then quick as a flash, Alvin leaped onto the birds back, hooking his claws into the birds back. With all his might he clawed at the birds back, scratching and biteing.

The bird sqwarked in pain, releasing Theodore. Simon saw and got ready to cath him, Theodore fell through the air but lucky for him as he was about to hit the ground he landed on something soft, he looked up to see it was his brother...

"Simon!" he cried, hugging him "I-i was so scared but you saved me and..and" he said, Simon smiled

"its ok Theo your ok now me and Alvi- wait... ALVIN!" he shouted,

he looked up to see the hawke was gone and do was Alvin. He looked at Theodore, not knowing what to do...

"Simon" Theodore asked "w-weres Alvin...hes ok right"

Simon looked at his baby brother and saw the tears forming in his eyes, he gulped, terrified of the idea that their big brother may be dead.

"I hope so Theodore...I really hope so"


Meanwhile, up in the air, Alvin clung onto the birds back not wanting to let go but the bird wasn't paying attention to were its next meal was, it was more interested in getting the chipmunk off its back.

Alvin had his claws still in the birds back, and everytime the bird tried to get him his claws would got deeper. The bird had enough as it couldnt take the pain, it turned his head not paying atttention to were it was going instead it was now trying to grab Alvin with its beak...

"keep flying you stupid bird" he shouted, the bird didnt listen.

As it tried to attack him, Alvin noticed they was aiming for a tree.

"Oh no" he whispered

Then as the bird was about to crash, Alvin leapt of it, falling through the air, coming closer and closer to the ground then blackness...


Well chapter 2 guys, i hoped you liked it. Ill try and get chapter 3 up as soon as possible :)

In chapter 3, their will be two familier faces in it, I think you know who they both are ;)