heres chapter 8 :)
Four chipmunks kept running, heading the direction of the scream.
They had ran over 2 hours, Eleanor and Theodore was a couple feet behind, they had stopped over ten times due to the lack of energy they both have. Simon and Jeanette had got fed up with stopping.
Right now they was running, they just managed to get through a cave that led to the otherside.
Simon and Jeanette had stopped because they came to a cliff edge. They could see right over to the ocean that was on the other side of the big forest, Eleanor and Theodore wasn't far behind, the two chipmunks was just running over some rocky bumps.
Theodore jumped over a them first, he landed perfectly on the other hand, Eleanor seemed quite nervous. She hated jumping over things because she was worried something could happen, she had a feelen that something would happen...
"C'mon Eleanor its safe" Theodore shouted from the otherside. she gulped
"ok...j-just give me a minute" she shouted
Theodore began to worry, he could sence her fear. All he wanted to was be there with her and cheer her on but he said he'd be on the otherside waiting for her.
Eleanor looked up at the rock, it looked really high, she closed her eyes...
'C'mon Eleanor what did Brittany always say...'be strong and believe in better' c'mon i need to do it" she thought.
Eleanor opened her eyes ands looked up, she then bent her legs as if she was in a pounce pasition and then she jumped. Eleanor jumped her hardest, she could see the tip of the rock but it was in close...too close, then as she thought she was about to miss it, her leg hit it, knocking her off target. Eleanor wobbled as her leg shatterd, she was in so much pain she couldn't concentrate on her landing.
Theodore watched and saw what happend, he noticed that she wasn't going to make it with out hurtig herself so as his instincts took over he got in position, ready to catch her.
Eleanor cried feeling her leg, she noticed she was gonna hit the ground so she closed her eyes.
when she opened them she saw she was in Theodores arms (again) she cried but not only because she was in pain but also he was their when she needed him.
"Eleanor a-are you ok?" he asked, she just whimpered as her leg hurt
"M-MY LEG!" she cried.
Simon and Jeanette came running after they heard all the comotion, when they came they saw Eleanor crying her eyes out as Theodore held her/
"what happend?" Jeanette asked as she came to her sisters side
Eleanor was to much in pain to answer so Theodore answered instead.
"shes bashed her leg as she jumped...she might have broken it" he said as he was concerned for his girlfriends health.
Simon egsamind it from thigh to toe...
"she has and badly" he said then in the next second he walked over to some tall grass and pulled some, the then grabbed a bit of mosk of off the trees and some vine that was loosley hanging, he then walked back over to Eleanor.
Simon then wrapped mosk all over her leg and over it he wrapped the long grass. When he finisshed he tied it together with the vine. Whe he did that, he had made a deacant leg bandage that should stable her leg...
"here we go, that should help for abit, if it comes loose I'll do it again" he smiled
Eleanor smiled and looked at Theodore, he smiled back. Jeanette realised something
"how is she gonna move though?" she said, Simon looked and then saw some broken twigs she he walked over to them and picked them up, he walked back over to Eleanor and gave them to her " these should help"
Eleanor looked and then realised, so she leaned against them and began to walk. The twigs was like crutches but twigs.
"There perfect but I'll never be able to keep up" she said putting her head down.
"don't worry Eleanor will walk with you" Theodore said smiling at her, he kissed her forehead as he did.
She smiled then all four of them bagan to walk the direction they was going, when they reached the cliff edge Simon grabbed some vine and tied it round the chipettes, he then lowerd them down with Theodores help. Afterwards he then did the same with Thedore, when he reached th eground Simon then tied the vine to the tree and lowerd heim self down. once they was all down they then carried on running the same direction getting closer to their brother and sister...
I know its short but i ran out of time (yeah i have a time limit)
I haven't got much to say eccept please reviw and tell me if you like it because i dont see the point of carrying it on when know ones reviewing it, I have like 13 other stories to right which are way better than this story. I only did this first for a practice but hey its doing ok :)
please review and let me know id i should carry it on?
