WEll heres the chapter that got deleted and luckily i was in the mood, i was proud of it aswell.
I hope you enjoy, If you have any question your ok to ask...
It was night and the moon was full, giving off the love sensation. The stars was twinkling their sparks and the night was like the ravens sea.
Down in the heaven meadow, three chipmunk couples was planning a plesant evening together. Alvin and Brittany was gonna be sending the night by the lake under a out maple tree, Simon and Jeanette as gonna spnd the night, star gazing up at the indego sky on the flower hills and Theodore and Eleanor was gonna spend the night in an old orchard where juicy oranges and riped, red apples grow
Theodore x Eleanor
Both of the plump chipmunks was layed under a orange tree, feeding each other orange slices. They looked in each others eyes as they did.
Theodore looked in her eyes, they reminded him off the feilds greeniest grass, they was like the worlds greenest rubys that sparked with the stars. Eleanor looked in his eyes and they reminded her off the greeneist leaves on rose bush.
They both sighed as they admired each other, Theodore was leaned against the tree as Eleanor rested her head on his shoulder...
"its such a lovely night" Eleanor said, admiring the stars.
"yeah it is" Theodore replied, he wrapped his arms around her shoulders, looking at her.
Eleanor looked up to see him looking down n her, she smiled egsacley knowing what he ws thinking. She giggles...
"Not me...the sky" she said pointing to the stars
Theodore looked the way she was pointing and stared as the starry night shown apon the chipmunks, as they looked a shooting star. Eleanor smiled, knowing what this ment...
"make a wish Ellie" she heard him say
Eleanor looked at him and smiled, she deeply thought about what she'd like to happen with her and Theodore. She smiled, imagoning her dream. Theodore also smiled as he saw her face, he had feeling it was a gooden.
She opened her eyes and looked at him...
"what you wsh for? Ellie" he asked
"I wished...That someday, you and me will be togther and make a family...are family" she said taking his paw.
Theodore smiled, he always wanted a family of his own with a loving mate and kits, his kits. He also wanted to tell her how he really felt about her aswell. Then it clicked in him, tonights the night he would tell her...
"Eleanor, I-i just wanted to tell you that..." he began
Theodores cheeks began to warm up, his paws got sweatty and his knees began to shake even though he was on he ground. Eleanor watched as he began...
"I...I...I love..." he was about to say but then his eyes cought orange that was about to fall "...ORANGE!" he shouted
"orange but i thought you loved green" she wonderd
"NO...ORAANGE!" and with that he pulled her out of the way.
The range fell and splatted on the floor, it covoured them both in sticky jouice. Eleanor and Theodore couldn't help but leaught as there was orange peal all over them. Even thought Eleanor had a broken leg, Theodore manged to pull her out of the way with out hurting her
"you ok?" he asked when he stopped laughing.
"yeah thanks" she said smiling at him.
once they both cought their breaths, Theodore looked at her taking her paw.
"Eleanor, what i wanted to say was...I love you" he finished
Eleanor smiled an ear to ear smile, she was screaming in her head down to her heart. He told her he loves her, he feels the same way. She got part of her wish but would it continue on true?
"I love you too" she said
Theodore smiled as did Eleanor and then in the nexy second the both began to lean in, closer and closer until their lips met. They both kissed, the more the stars twinkled the more the kiss got passionate. They truely loved each other...
Simon x Jeanette
Somewhere else on the flowery hill, Simon and Jeanette was star gazing.
They both tried to look for pictures in the sky, Jeanette was smiling as she looked at them Simon on the otherhand turned to her and saw her eyes twinkle everytime she giggled. He loved it when she did...
"oh look, that one looks like a...heart" she said slowely, looking at Simon
Simon smiled and looked were she was looking, he then sat up and looked at the daisys. He then stopped at a certain one. It had all of its perfect pearl petals in a smooth shape. He smiled and picked it.
Simon the turned towards Jeanette as she was sitting up. The in the next second he placed it behind her ear...
"wow, evan the flower can beat your beauty" he said complimenting her looks.
Jeanette smiled but on the inside she didn't believe him. She tought she was ugly, skinny and a bigg whimp who can't grow up, She thought she wasn't normel.
"Thanks but i don't think i am..." she began to say "...am not a beautiful Brittany or a cute Eleanor...am a Jeanette, a skinny weasel who's afraid of her own shadow" she finished
Simon listend to her everyword he was shocked to hear this from her mouth, how could she think this. To him, she was the most beautifulest chipette he ad ever seen in his life
"Jeanette how could you say that...your beautiful, your pretty, your cute, your perfect..." he began, Jeanette listend " Jeanette your not a Brittany model or a adorable Eleanor because your a Jeanett with a pure golden heart, beautiful on th inside and out..." he said
Jeanette was smiling as she looked in his sapphire eye, she could feel tears coming to her eyes.
"and another thing Jeanette, your not a weasel whos afraid of her shadow...Listen ok, when your big sister got lost it was just you and Eleanor and you took care of her, protecting her in the result of nearly killing me..." he said chucling, she giggle abit aswell ".. and you was determind to find your sister, you travel miles not giving up...now does that sound like a weasel scared of her ow shadow?" he asked, she shook her head
"Jeanette your perfect the w
ay you are, you dont have to be beautiful, cute or brave. Just be you...the girl i love" he finished
Jeanette was sat their, tears fell out of her eyes. He was right, she is perfet no matter what. How could she be so stupid, she never gave up on Brittay and she took care of ELeanor, why be like this...
"thanks Simon, that means alot to me" she said, he smiled
"it shoud...I love you" he said, Jeanette smiled
"I love you too" she finished
Then in the next second both of them began to lean in, their lips coming closer and closer then finally they connected. Simon and Jeanette kissed, the full moon shone on them giving the sensation of passion. They both was tuely in love...
Alvin x Brittany
In the same moment, two red furred Chipmunks was leaned agaist each other.
Both of them looked out at the open wated that shimmerd against the moons light, as they watched they would look at each other and smile. Alvin would look in her crystal clear blue eyes, they reminded him of the rares dimond thats shone in the suns light.
Brittany would love to look at his face, she loved his eyes, his hair, his colour, his smile, his eyes, everything she lovd. She was so gald to be having his kiits, she was looking forward to see how they looked. Do they look like a Alvin junior or Brittany the second. She couldn't help but giggle at at the thought...
"what you laughing at?" he asked even thought he loved her giggle.
"nothing really...just thinking if there will be a Alvin Jr or Brittany the second...sounds pretty cool, right?" she said, Alvin smiled at her
"yeah but whos gonna be worse i bet because we could get both you know, chipmunks do give birth in litters" he said
Brittany gulped, that was one thing she wasn't looking forwards to. She placed a paw on her slighty bulged tummy, she felt the sensatin flow to her spine as she rubbed it. Without asking, Alvin placed his paw on her stomach, when he did she flintched.
Brittany didn't mind but it just gets on her nerves everytime it does that, she sighed as she looked down at her stomach. The thought of being a perant scared her, she wounderd on what if she failed.
"Alvin...can i ask you something" she asked, Alvin sat up and looked down at her.
"yeah, anything Britt" he replied, she sighed
"a-are you scared" she asked,
He knew what she ment, he thought about wether if he'd be a good enough dad or not but then again woul he fail. The thought also scared him alittle.
"yeah...but Britts will get through this" he reasured her
Brittany wasn't hundred percent sure, she was terrified of he fact. She didn't have a clue on how to be a mom.
"how can you be so sure Alvin...I mean, i don't know how to be a mom and you don't know how to be a dad and for all i know...once you've had enough you could run off, no offence but i mean it. Im scared of failing" admitted
Alvin looked at her, he felt a bit offended when she said he would run off but he promised hiself that he would stand by her know matter also knew that they would pull throught it no matter what the world throws that them...
"Brittany, listen to me...there is no way i would leave you or the kits in a cruel, nasty world like this, no matter what the world throws at us will get through this, I promise i'll be here to protect and take care of you. I'll stand by you until death. Britts, I love you ok and never forget that" when he said this he kissed her on her forehead.
Brittany smiled as she looked in his hazle eyes, she should have more faith in him. She was so happy that he promised her this, all her worries was now gone. Alvin had made her feel alot better.
"I love you too" she finnished, he smiled when she said it.
both of them pressed their foreheads together, nosed touching as they looked in each others eyes. Then all of a sudden they could feel them selves coming closer, their lips was inches away. In the next second they both kissed, the more the moved the more passionate the kiss got.
They both was truely in love as their kiss was tender and sweet.
When all the couples haed their little kiss, they then all drifted into a small sleep, the grils was in the boys arms as they slep. They all dreamt of each other that night, dreaming of the upcoming futor...
Hope you liked it, it was written better befor it got deleted but hey i saved it this time lol
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