Am back

You know its hard when you've got three stories on the go, if you noticed my new one 'Dance are hearts away' but am not gonna continue that one until av got one of these finished, literally it takes me an hour and a half to write a chapter :(

This story is turning out better than a thought but still is hard with the errors, am a fast typer so its hard no to make a mistake.

Av also been reading the stories an my favourites so far are:

-True love at first sight

-Charlenes revenge

-Spring break

-unstoppable

-Chipmunk lagoon

-Ajs story

Tell you one thing guys these stories are amazing, i read them and i can see it happening in my head an if you don't mind it give me the urge to draw a scene out of them, their just so cool :D

Anyway back to my story, there all gonna go for a walk and something happens...


Chapter 14- A little family time

Two week had pasted

It was a lovely, sunny morning. The sun was high and the birds was churping, six chipmunks was gathered around in a circle next to the lake. They all was hving some fruit that Eleanor and Theodore had collected for beakfast.

Brittanys stomach had gotten bigger over the last few days. She was also eating alot more aswell. At the mment she was munching on a slice of Apple. The others was eating the same except Simon and Theodore, they preferd orange instead.

"well this is delicouse" Simon said finishing his orange slice.

"yeah weres it from?" Alvin asked taking abit of his apple

Eleanor and Theodore looked at each other, they was sat right next to the orchard feild. Instead of repling they pointed to the orange and Apple trees...

"oh yeah...I didn't see" Alvin said, everyone just laughed at his stupidity

Everyone finished and cleaned up their sticky paws and the mess they left behind. Once they did they all then gatherd back around, thinking of something to do...

"well what shall we do then?" Simon asked

"I know, lets go swimming" Jeanette suggested, Brittany didn't like the idea

"uuur hello...pregnant chipette, onestly Jeanette i'll get cramp" she said, jeanette realised as her eyes fell opon her stomach.

"well what can we do?" she said,

"Why don't we go exploring i mean this place is huge...who knows what will find" Alvin said

Everyone smiled, likeing the idea but then Eleanor remembere her leg, how could she walk id she had a broken leg.

"Guys how can i...look at me" she said pointing to her leg, Everyone realised.

"i'll help you Ellie" Theodore said taking her paw, she smiled as he did.

"ok"

everyone agreed and stood up, they huddle together...

"Ok heres what were gonna do so everyone safe..." Simon started " Alvin your gonna walk with Brittany which you will anyway, Theodore your gonna walk with Eleanor like you said and Jeanette, your goon stick with me" he planned, everyone agreed.

They all then began to head west were the was some cliffs in the near distance, Simon was at the front whilst Alvin was at the back, they both wanted to make sure everyone was safe. Theodore was holding Eleanor as she used her wooden crutches to walk.

Brrittany was walking as she held her stomach, it began to hurt. She knew egsacly what was gonna happen...

"oh no" she whispered and with that she ra n from the middle.

Alvin, Simon, Theodore, Jeanette and Eleanor looked as they saw Brittany hurling over a tree root that was sticking out of the ground, she had her head hung over it spilling her guts out. Alvin rushed to her side as he rubbed her back, the others was a bit grossed out but they knew it wasn't her fault.

After a couple minutes of being sick, she stopped and wiped her mouth, her head hurt and she was so tired...

"ow, i hate this part of pregnacy" she mumbled, Alvin heard and turned towards the others,

"Guys maybe we should head back" he suggesed, everyone looked disspointed but Brittany knew she was ok.

"no no...we still can go, its only morning sickness" she smiled rubbing her stomach.

Everyone smiled but Alvin, he was concerned for health and he didn't want her to get hurt but if she says she's ok then ok but he thought he should keep an eye on her just incase.

They all began to walk again, they walked for fifteen minutes befor they came to a dead end. Alvin and Brittany remember this area quit well, they remembered that it was the same place were they got trapped by that wolf. It creeped them out abit thinking what would have happend if they didn't escape. None of them said anything about it, instead they was thinking where to head next...

"well we could climb" Simon suggested looking at the tallk tree that was taller than the cliff itself.

"yes we cou-" she began but go cut off

"NO!" Eleanor and Theodore shouted

Alvin, Brittany, Simon and Jeanette looked at them with a confused expression on their faces.

"what...am scared of hieghts" Eleanor said

"yeah me too" Theodore finished

Simon sighed and looked up at the tree he did some measure ments on what branch to take.

"ok then looks like its just us fou-" he began to say but then he go cut off

"No, me and Britts are gonna stay down here. I don't wanna risk her getting hurt or falling" Alvin said, when he did Brittany just sighed and rolled her eyes, she knew he was right but still he was acting more of her father than her boyfriend.

"Fine ok...looks like its just you and me Jeanette, you guys wait down here whilst me and Jeanett go and check it out" simon finsihed, they all nodded.

Alvin and Brittany went and sat agianst the rocky wall, Theodore an Eleanor went berry picking whildt Simon and Jeanette began to climb.


Both the byspecticle chimunks climbed higher and higher.

They was halfway up, Jeanett looked down as everything seemed like ants. It made her feel dizzy, she began to shake as she closed her eyes not wanting to move...

"Simon" she said in a shaky tone

Simon looked ta the branch underneath him and saw Jeanette shaking.

"yeah are you ok?" he asked, concerned for her.

"i c-can't do it...its...its so high" she said with her eyes still closed, Simon sighed he knew she was scared but they can't give up they've nearly reahed the top.

"jean remember what i said your a stong girl with a stong heart, don't give up now" he convinced her.

Jeanette gulped as she looked up at him, her vilotte eyes meet his sapphire blue ones. She forced a smile on her face as she gulped agian and then leapt onto the same branch as him. He smiled at her...

"Nic to see you" he joked, she giggled

"you too"

and with that they both began to climb again but unaware their was aa rotten branch up ahead, Simon leapt and just managed to land on the stronest part, he didn't even realise the branc was weak. He leaped off an jumped onto the next one, Jeanette didn't realise either that the branch was rotted.

She leapt from her branch onto the weak one, when she did the branch snapped. Jeanette screamed as she fell...

"JEANETTE!"


I know its short but i had to split it and anyway i was gettng tired.

Sorry abou the cliff hanger but i needed it lol, Just to remind you this story is 36 chapters long, I recon it will be chapter 17 or 18 were Brittany goes into labour and don't forget, Tony isn't gone yet either.

Tell me what you think in your reviews :)