Chapter 15 here we go


Chapter 15- bad luck

"JEANETTE"

Everyone screamed as they saw the poor chipette hang for her life, she was petrafide as Death neared. Simon who got quickley alerted saw climbed down to his lover...

"Jeanette hang on" he shouted as he reached her

"I cant...my paw is...slipping" she cried as he paw began to slip

Simon knew she was scared and he needed to get her before she lets go, she needed him. He jumped onto teh branch she was holding onto but it was a bit of a struggle as she was arm lenth. Simon lowerd as he held out his paw.

"Jeanette grab my paw" he shouted, Jeaette was to scared to let go.

"I-i cant...am scared" she cried

"Jeanette look at me" he said, Jeanette slowely opend her vilotte eyes and looked at him "I promise you i won't let go, jen you have to trust me" he finnished

Jeanette gulped as she looked down, she couldn't rerly see the others because they was so high up. She then looked up in to Simon sapphire eyes, then in the next second she released on arm and reached up to Simon. Simon reached and then grabbed her, once he got her he wrapped both arms around her and pulled her up.

Jeanette cried in his chest, she cried out in fear as she almost got killed. Simon just hugged her back, soothing her calmness.


Back down at the bottem, Alvin, Brittany, Theodore, and Eleanor watched as they saw Simon rescue Jeanette.

They sighed in relief as they then watched then climb to the top, once they reached the top, Theodore and Eleanor go back to picking their berries whilst Alvin and Brittany go back to relaxing.

Brittany sat down and relaxad as she placed a paw on her bulged stomach. Her stomach hurt but not because she was gonna puke but because she felt a kick, then another one and another one. Her eyes widend as she felt it.

"Alvin" she said, he looked at her

"yeah" he replied,

"Feel this" she finished then she grabbed her paw and placed it were the kicking was.

They waited a few minutes then suddenly they felt another one, this one was a strong one. Alvin' eyes widend as he felt it...

"was that what i think it was" he asked, Brittany giggled as he looked at her suprised.

"yep...they can feel their dad" she smild, Alvin smiled when she said that word. He coudn't wait.


Elenor and Theodore was picking some black berries, once they finnished they then took them and walked over to a tree and began to eat them.

They ate one by one but then there was one left and they couldn't decide who should have it.

"You have it Ellie...am full" Theodore offered

"No thank you...you have it" Eleanor replied

"No i insist" he answered

"So do i" she replied

"No you"

"no you"

"ELEANOR!" he shouted

"THEODORE!" she shouted back

Alvin who was sat on the otherside began to get annoyed with their behavieour, Brittany was asleep an he was worried that they may wake her up.

He sighed as he got up and stormed over to them, he glared as he did. Eleanor and Theodore didn't notice as they argued about who should have the last berry.

"would you guys quit it" he shouted snatching the berry off them

"HEY!" they both shouted but then cowered when they saw the look on Alvins face.

"would you shut up, Britts is asleep" he shot and then he chucked the berry on the floor and stood on it.

Eleanor and Theodore looked as he walked back to the aurban chipette. They knew he was only trying to help her but there was no reason to be grouchy about it


Simon and Jeanette reached the top and jumped up onto the grass, it didn't look any different from the bottem.

Jeanette looked as she noticed some of the tree was different types, so she started to walk towards them as she looked for their seeds.

Simon on the other hand watched as she did, he smiled as noticed she wasn't so scared anymore. HE then turned around and looked at the hight veiw, he could see almost the all the forest but all of a sudded he noticed some weird shaped mountains in the far distance, they was square and grey. Simon then realised they was builings...he stood near the edge as he examind them.

But what he hadn't realised was the ciff was edge began to crack, braking apart...

"oh ho!"


Sorry its short but i was tired

another cliff hanger, whos gonna get hurt or will they survive

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