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Chapter 2- Forbidden love

Soon Finding out their kit's was playing with the enimies kit's, Alvin and Brittany pannicked, also knowing the kit's mother was an enimie to Oliviar and she was out for revenge made it worse.

The two perant's rushed out of the tree, heading the direction their kit's was. The other's looked at each other, knowing egsacly what each other was thinking.

"i think we should follow...there may be trouble" Jeanette suggested, Oliviar nodded.

"yeah, I know Charlene more than any of you and trust me, she's quite a fighter pluss knowing her, she'll have a new mate" she answered.

"c'mon then" Jeanette replied but Simon pulled her back.

"Jean are you crazy...you could get hurt" he said, Jeanette just huffed.

"he's right Jean, it's a really big risk" Eleanor added.

"I'll just stay away and beside's your with me" Jeanette told Simon.

Simon didn't reply because thinking of it, she could be ok as long as she stay's out of the way and with him being there, he won't let anyone touch her. He just slowely nodded.

"ok, but aslong as you stay near me" he said, She smiled throwing her arms around him.

"ok then, lets go. Alvin and Brittany could need us" Oliviar told them.

They all nodded and headed the direction their older sibling's went. Sam and Theodore came intime to see the five leave so they followed. Simon, Jeanette, Eleanor, Theodore, Oliviar and Sam all stayed close as they ran together.


Alvin and Brittany ran as fast as they could towards there kit's. They wasn't far but knowing Aj, he brings the trouble so the mother could be there.

Meanwhile, Aj, Daneil and Lucy was having fun playing with the other three kit's. They all became best friend's and made a promise that no matter what, they'll be friend's forever. The six kit's was playing tag, Aj and Drake was on whilst Lucy, Daneil, Sophie and Sue ran.

Aj was running after Sophie and Drake was running after Lucy, Sue and Daneil stopped running when they noticed. Both of them got bored of it so they decided to play their own little game. The other four saw and stopped running as they looked at them.

"hey guy's, what are you doing" Aj asked. Daneil just frowend

"what's the point in pwaying if your only gonna chace your girlfriend" he answered, taking Sue's paw.

When he said the world 'girlfriend, Aj and Sophie blushed in embarrasement. The two kit's looked at each other and then glared at Daneil.

"shut up!" the both of them said, Daniel and Sue bursted out laughing.

Lucy and Drake let out a giggle because of their siblings. They could tell Aj liked Sophie and it was pretty oviouse that she liked him. Sophie and Aj just rolled their eye's in annoyance and looked at each other then back at them.

"well you can't talk, You fancy Sue" Aj shot, Daneil and Sue stopped laughing and suddenly went red. He was about to say something when someone cut him off.

"HE BEST NOT!"

The six kit's quickly turned around to see a blond adult chipette, she had green eye's and a long ponytail. She looked rough with ring's round her eye's, beside her was another chipmunk, he was male and he had dirty blond fur with emarald eye's, his hair was spiky and for some reason he had a hint of meaness in his eye's.

The kits coward when they saw, Drake, sue and Sophie gulped and took a few step's forward. Charlene glared at them then at the other three, she hated other kit's playing with them, specialy crushing on them.

"which one of you three is Daneil?" she asked

Daneil began to shake, Lucy and Aj looked at him which told Charlene who it was. Then in the next second she stormed over to him, roughly picking him up but the scruft of fur on the back of his neck. She lifted him eye level, looking him dead in the eye's...

"listen Mr, no one and i mean no one will crush on my daughter's you hear me and you two" she said, glaring at Aj and Lucy "the same applie's for you aswell"

Lucy and Aj gulped as they quickly clung onto each other, Daneil on the other hand began to cry in pain, the chipette's grip was hurting him.

"let me go" he said, Charlene just laughed at him.

"you think am gonna let you go after finding out you like my dau-" she didn't get to finnish because something pounced on her.

Daneil fell to the ground but suddenly got pulled up when he saw his dad, Alvin looked at his son making sure he wasn't hurt.

"are you ok Daneil?" he asked, checking his neck.

"yes thank you" he replied as his Brother and Sister rushed over, pouncing on Alvin.

He was about to say something when he suddenly relised Brittanys position. All of them looked over and saw Brittany attacking Charlene but the blond chipette wasn't weak, she attacked back using her claw's and teeth.

"DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH MY BABY... YOU HORRIBLE RAT" Brittany shot, ragging her hair. Charlene just laughed.

"WELL I WON'T HAVE TOO AS LONG AS HE STAY'S AWAY FROM MINE" She shouted, scratching her arm.

"OH DON'T WORRY..." she began, pulling her fist back " HE WILL!"

Brittany was about to strike when someone ragged her off Charlene. The aurban chipette looked up and saw an unfamiliar male chipmunk holding her. He wouldn't let her go, she began to struggle free but his grip was too strong.

The other's came just intime to see Charlene, picking herself up as she noticed her mate holding the chipette but she then noticed Oliviar, She smiled evily. On the other hand, Alvin didn't like this certain chipmunk holding his mate, so he stormed over and pulled Brittany out of his grip sending a blow to his face, the chipmunk stumbled backward's holding his nose as he looked at him.

The chipmunk was about to charge for him when Charlene stopped him, she just glared at everyone else specially Oliviar...

"well, well, well isn't it my old friend Oliviar" she said, Oliviar just glared.

"were not friend's, we was never friend's" she shot, Charlene just glared.

"oh, well i knew i never could beat your 'so called bezzie's, i'm guessing that mental cow and the fat rat's are them" she said.

Brittany, Jeanette and Eleanor glared and was about to charge but Alvin, Simon and Theodore helt them back, holding them in their arm's. The Chipette's just calmed down as they watched.

"Their not my bessie's...their my sister's and they'll always be ten time's better than you'll ever be but explain to me Charlene, what the hell did i ever do to you?" Oliviar asked, the blond chipette just rolled her eye's, sighing in annoyance.

"oh, you on about my revenge, well i'll tell you why...you betraded me, as soon as you met Sam i was out of the picture, you got pregnant and then you kicked me out of your house. I hate you for what you did" She explained, they all looked at her confused.

"Well, your was with Tony aswell, you got pregnant and the only reason i threw you out was because of the sick stuff you came out with about my daughter's" she shot.

"actually, whilst you was with Mr romancer, Tony forced me and for your infromation, the only reason i got pregnant was because he raped me, i tried to shout you for help but no, you didn't hear because of him. YOU LEFT ME!" she she finnished.

"I'm sorry for not hearing you but that's not my fault" she said, Charlene just scoffed.

"yeah rate...just stay away from me otherwise yorur daughter's won't be the only one's dead..." she said, turning to Alvin and Brittany "...and as for you two, keep your brat's away from my kit's or they'll be knocking on death's door's.

Alvin and Brittany just glared, Daneil, AJ and Lucy quiverd as they hid behind their perants. Charlene and her mate took one more glance at Oliviar and Sam, glaring in progress before they headed back the direction they came.

Drake, Sophie and Sue took another look at Aj, Daneil and Lucy, knowing it would be the last time they'ed see each other again. They all knew their friendship was forbidden, specialy their love. The six kit's waved as the they left with Charlene and her mate. Lucy wiped a tear from her eye, Daneil and Aj sighed as they looked down, the three of them just wanted to see their face's again but they knew they couldn't and never will.

Once they was out of sight, the red furred chipmunks and their kit's walked over to the other's. Oliviar sighed and looked at them.

"well, that won't be the last of her" she mutted, Sam just put an arm around her.

"don't worry, she can't do anything, she's out numbered anyway" he said, Olivar smiled.

"yeah and beside's, if she touch'es my babie's again i'll give her more than a simple scratch" Brittany said, thinking back to her fight.

"you haven't changed one bit, you know" Oliviar joked, they all just laughed as Brittany rolled her eye's.

"what-ever" she told her, Oliviar just rolled her eye's.

"anyway, i think we should be heading back, it's getting dark and i think the children are getting tird and so are Jeanette and Eleanor" she pointed out when she saw the chipette's yawn, Simon smiled.

"she's right, c'mon Jean, you need your rest" he said

"and so do you Ellie" Theodore added, the Chipette's just moaned.

"but am not *yawn* tired" Jeanette and Eleanor wined,

All of them just laughed and within the next minute, all of them headed back to their nest's. On the way, the three kit's felt misirable about not seeing their news friend's, there was a connection with them that felt amazing, it was like they could go day's full of happiness with out being down but now it's gone, they felt like they'll never be happy again.

They may be young but like people say, you can never be to young to be in love...


aaaaawwww poor kid's, they can never see their friend's (crushe's) again. :(

But doen't it give you an idea what will happen in the sequel ;)

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