An:/ It seems I have made a lot of you mad about the doujutsu. Now, look here, sillies. I didn't want to spoil it for you, but clearly if I don't give the answer out straight, you won't listen.
SPOILER ALERT FOR THIS STORY!
No...no...NO! This doujutsu is never going to be something like the rinnegan or any powerful jutsu. (I'm not looking at you TertiusArmada, I understand where you're coming from, I'm replying to others and their pms) If anything, all it really does is improve the hiraishin. Remember Minato said something about a level two hiraishin in the series? Well I built up on that idea, and gave the Namikazes the ability of enhanced senses while reserving chakra (reason why Minato did it with that clone earlier) also, if you noticed, Minato was rather hesitant about using the jutsu...hmmm I wonder why...this isn't some kind of overpowered doujutsu. It's more like, ooo I have now the ability to reserve my chakra while being able to do my hiraishin WITHOUT A KUNAI! poof. The only improvement that has occurred so far with this new doujutsu. That's it!
My intentions to make a harem or anything of the sort has been completely shut down as said from previous chapters. Anything godlike...is also rejected. I personally thought this was clear. I made Naruto a jounin at a young age because I thought with the right nurturing, he would have been a lot stronger at a younger age. Being the son of two powerful figures obviously calls for that. But last time I checked, Naruto's parents were not the kamis themselves. So no...Naruto will not be able to move mountains at will and bend rivers with a flick of his wrists. Calm yourselves. I'm not into making these ridiculous characters (sorry to those who do, I don't mean any harm. I personally think they are a bit...over bearing)
END OF SPOILER
Alright. I hope that clears up the fog about the doujutsu. Don't worry! If you didn't read it, it will hopefully be explained in a later chapter, if you're patient enough. It wasn't much of a spoiler so if you did read it, not much has changed.
I'm kind of caught between a rock and hard place and not only have I caught a cold (a nasty one at that) but I've also caught writers block. Now, on a normal occasion, I would continue to OMAKE I started earlier back 8-9 chapters ago but I just feel like I'm running on vapor here. BUT I did get the chapter done in at least a week, so next time, give me time. I felt slightly discouraged that people didn't like the last chapter and so I guess it just knocked me off my streak. This, however, does not mean its on Hiatus nor am I discontinuing. The Namikaze Legend will continue. Just give me a small break alright? Everybody needs a break, and I think I deserve one right about now.
So here is a little recap of what's happening:
Chuunin exam:
Naruto died
Kyuubi came out
Naruto comes back
Naruto has a new doujutsu (THAT DOES NOT MAKE HIM ALL POWERFUL N' SHIT! GEEZ)
New guy comes in
Orochimaru dies
That's it...i think...
ALSO: I don't think I've failed to mention this several times. But I don't appreciate rude comments. Any flame will hopefully not be returned anymore, but I definitely won't appreciate them. This time I received some borderline ones that I had to reread a couple times before deeming it innocuous ranting. But next time, watch your words or I'll make you eat them.
brief disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or the likes, I don't own shit. I can't even afford a cookie before running off to beg my parents for money...I'm broke...okaneganai?
"One down..."
Orochimaru let out a choke just as blood began to run down his lips. The figure behind flicked the sword to the side and let the body drop to the floor with a muffled thud. Naruto was frozen in place. This man...he didn't even sense him! He snapped out of it and quickly flashed in front of him, ready to stab him with his now unsealed sword (an:/ and you thought I'd let him just chuck it to the side, the sword is back).
The man quickly deflected the sword and with a swift kick, he sent Naruto barreling away. Naruto flashed mid-roll a few meters away, cradling his ribs.
"I meant that as a joke, Naruto-kun...no need to get so feisty"
"Who are you, how do you know my name?"
"Now now, no need to drown me in questions. Relax. I just needed a small personal audience with you. It will be quick I promise."
Naruto's eyes narrowed and turned icy. The amber cooled to a sharp brown. He shifted into stance.
"What do you want." He snapped.
"Just here to give you a little...prophecy..."
"A prophecy? What do you mean."
"There are going to be rather troubling conflicts up ahead, a few enemies that want both of us dead. Frankly speaking, they're after your bijuu. But, you're going to kill them with rather ease so you shouldn't be worried."
Naruto's eyes flashed dangerously as his eyes narrowed a the man. His lips were set in a firm line as he glared.
"How-"
"I was doing us a favor killing this snake here. He was going to be a real problem in the future..."
"Are you saying you have the gift of insight?"
"...Something like that." the man smiled.
"Isn't that rather cheating? Being able to see the future and change it to your will...do you think you're kami?"
"Oh no...quite the opposite. I'd rather think of myself as the Shinigami. I'm here to reap the lives that need to go, and I felt that Orochimaru needed to go."
Naruto's foot shifted as sweat started to collect under his hitai ate.
"His little apprentice, Kabuto, is still going to work for me, even with this man gone so I figured, why have two of them? The sannin was a liability and so I quickly dispatched him. It's never one's interest to attempt to control a figure so powerful. Shame, though, really. He was so full of talent, wasted away on envy and jealousy."
"So you worked with him?"
"Of course. But don't go bunching me with him...I've got more pride than that. Though I support his plan for the Uchiha boy wholeheartedly. I know he's your student but he's a key component in the master plan and what Kabuto has in store for him will speed up the process. Alright. Well that's all I wanted to say, I'll be off now!-"
"What makes you think you're getting away?"
The smile under the hood dropped as the man shifted his weight to face Naruto.
"You're barking up the wrong tree, boy."
Naruto flinched when the man suddenly disappeared. The next thing he knew, he was aerial and his stomach felt like a boss summon just head butted him. He landed on the roof with a thud. He groaned as he looked up. The man stood above him and Naruto could almost see under the hood, but the man moved ever so slightly, obstructing Naruto's view.
"Wh-who are you..."
"None of your concern. Until next time, Namikaze Naruto. Farewell."
And with that, the man disappeared.
The Barrier flickered a few times before it shattered like glass. Minato and Kushina immediately went in to search for their son, finding him on the floor, struggling to breathe. They saw Orochimaru's body and Minato immediately called ANBU.
"Naruto..." Kushina brought Naruto up and caught him in a desperate hug. "Oh kami, never do that again."
"Kaa-san..."
Naruto slowly brought his hands up to hug back. He winced and Kushina immediately let go.
"Is there something wrong?"
"I feel a bit tired."
"It's those eyes, Naruto." Naruto looked up to his dad. Minato kneeled down and place his hands on Naruto's shoulders.
"Naruto, you can't use those eyes unless you really have to..."
"W-why? What eyes?"
"Remember, you had amber eyes. This is a rather...interesting doujutsu. It's the level three Hiraishin."
"What does it do?"
"It will help maintain and control your chakra for successive hiraishin without the aid of seals. You senses will also increase to an extent. But, you shouldn't use it often. It's very taxing and there are downsides to it. I can't tell you the downside because it varies in each Namikaze. You'll have to find out on your own."
Naruto frowned a little. An ANBU flashed next to Minato and kneeled.
"The Oto and Suna nin are retreating. The jinchuuriki is in our hands and so are the Kazekage's children."
"Dismissed." Minato ordered and turned his family.
"So who killed Orochimaru?"
Naruto tried to stand up but winced.
"The man. I didn't get much of a reading on him."
"Naruto-Sensei!"
Naruto turned around to see his three students approaching him. He shifted and started to move forward to meet them halfway but somehow everything went vertigo and then black.
(One week later)
Sakura made her way around the hospital, doing her daily rounds of visiting patients. Ever since her apprenticeship with Rei and Rin, she's been taking courses and doing small jobs around the hospital. Today she was visiting the ward with the shinobi that were injured during the invasion. There weren't that many, but the severity of the wounds made up for the lack in numbers. Most were sporting missing limbs and some where in comas. Or, for a more accurate number, only one person was in a coma as a result of the invasion. Out of all the patients there, he probably had the least damage but it was most likely due to his supposed Kekkei genkai. At least that's what the Hokage mentioned.
Sakura stood outside of the room, the name tag reading the patient's name. It was slightly heartbreaking seeing him sleeping and unmoving. She opened the door and was greeted with a blonde boy hooked up with monitors and other wires. A little vase of tiger lilies was settled on the stand and the blinds were opened. His parents must have visited him in the morning.
She always saved his room for last because every time she made her way here she found herself always sitting quietly in the empty chair and waiting for the boy to wake up. Occasionally she'd wait an hour or so or until a nurse came in and shooed her away. She leaned back and watched Naruto as his chest slowly rose and then fell back, the steady rhythm of his breathing lulling her to sleep. Soon she found herself falling asleep, eyelids slowly closing and her head rocking against her arm that was propped up on the armrest.
"...Sakura?"
Her eyes snapped open and her head shot up, expecting a nurse to be looking over her with a scowl. But when she was met with nothing, her head looked around for the source.
"Down here, Sakura."
Her head looked at the bed next to her and green met blue.
"Naruto?...Naruto? You're awake! Oh my, you're awake!"
She jumped out of her seat and practically tackled Naruto.
"Ow...ow...my arm. Please, release my arm."
Sakura murmured an apology as she loosened her grip. She brought him out at shoulder length when he propped himself up. She inspected him, dodging her head around to make sure he was okay. She let out a sigh and bonked the boy on the head.
"Ow! What was that for!"
"Dammit, Naruto-sensei! Don't go around scaring people like that! You've been out for a week!"
"A week! Shit! I have to report- urg" Naruto winced and cringed as he cradled his ribs. After another quick check up, Sakura bonked him on the head again.
"You should be resting! Don't go around moving abruptly like that otherwise you'll reopen something."
"H-hai, Sakura"
Naruto went back to cradling his head while a ghost of a small smile
spread across Sakura's face. It was good to have Naruto back, even if he was only gone for a week. She whipped around with the door slid open violently.
"Haruno Sakura. Please refrain from wasting your time waiting on a-"
The nurse walking in stopped her words when she noticed Naruto was awake.
"N-Namikaze-san! You're awake! I'll tell the Hokage immediately."
The nurse succuried off, leaving the two in a thick silence.
"I was really hoping for some peace and quiet for just a bit longer."
"What do you mean-"
Minato suddenly appeared in the room and launched himself at Naruto.
"Naru-chan~! You're awake!"
Minato trapped him in an inescapable hug and began rubbing his face against Naruto's. Naruto was desperately trying to pry his father off but to no avail.
"Mi-na-to. Get off my son before you suffocate him."
Kushina's appeared at the doorway and walked up to the duo before ripping the grown man off Naruto.
"Naruto, how are you feeling?"
"Like my dad just greeted me in the most unHokage-like way possible. In pain."
"Sorry to hear that Naruto. Now do you want a hug from mommy too? I'm sure mine will pop all your bones back in place..." The saccharine voice of Kushina rung through the air as Kushina approached the bed like a predator, the lights in her eyes gleaming dangerously.
"Wait..no...please...no...s-STOP!" *KRACK* "OWWWWW!"
Sakura just shifted away awkwardly and left the room, leaving the Namikazes to themselves as the cries for help was muffle by her closing the door.
(To the future! By like a month or so.)
"I've called you all today to announce the genin that have been promoted during the, er- chuunin exams."
Minato cleared his throat as he pulled a scroll out with the names. A line of genin stood in formation in his office and their jounin instructors were on the peripheral.
"I would like the following genins to step forth and claim their new status as chuunin."
Minato looked down at the sheet and began reading off the names.
"Aoba Yoki, Nara Shikamaru, and Konohamaru Sarutobi. Please step forth as we hand to you your chuunin vests."
The three boys stepped forward and accepted their three green vests. Yoki's eyes glinted with mischief as they made contact with Minato's eyes. The air of finality settled and an Uchiha's eyes flashed dangerously and his fist clenched tight. The Hokage dismissed the group and the jounins and disappointed genins started to file out. Sasuke tsked and turned away towards the door but a hand reached out and grabbed him wrists. He whipped around, ready to bash in the offender but was halted at the sight of Yoki. He clenched his teeth.
"What do you want." He snarled.
Yoki stayed silent until everyone filed out except the Hokage and the Sannin, Jiraiya.
"Uchiha Sasuke, we have a preposition for you, involving your rank."
Naruto trudged his way over to the training grounds. It was his day off but that meant squat. He needed to train. He felt a bit weird without the weight of his jounin vest, but he wasn't complaining. He settled for a gray hoodie over fishnet and a pair of ANBU pants. He left his hitai ate and his bib at home. His mom insisted that he learned the "ways of the civilian" to get a sense of norm. But clearly that wasn't working out for him since instead of walking on the dirt road like any normal person would, he was jumping from the roofs and trees, only leaving a cloud of dust or a breeze in his wake...like the ninja he was. He currently made his way to the training ground where he was most at home and decided to take a break from the aerial mode of transportation.
He flung his arms over his head and let out a yawn. It would be only two months till he left, give or take a few days. He was still a fresh jounin with not many missions under his belt, regardless of all his war efforts and bounty collection. He was thirteen going on fourteen and everyone else was twice his age. Not particularly comforting, being the "young'un" of the group. He shied away from the jounin lounge whenever possible and avoided contact with the other jounin instructors if he could.
He found an open training field and began his stretches. By leaving, of course, he meant a training trip. Another one. Another training trip with Jiraiya. I know, I know, what good would two training trips with the old fart do? Well sure, the guy was always at the bathhouses instead of teaching him, but this time would be different. Jiraiya needed someone to take care of his spy network and Naruto was up for the job. Not to mention the duo would be going on some jounin missions, of course. A little bit of assassination here, some recon there, a dash of infiltration, and a pinch of badassery was added to the mix and Naruto was all for it.
He would probably be gone for two years or so just to get a grasp of the network and probably take on some missions. His students have missions to take while he's gone so it will be okay. Plus, he just added a spy of his own to the network. Might as well start now, right?
Naruto scrunched his nose and began his sets.
Sasuke entered the compound and dropped the duffle bag he was carrying on the floor of his room before slumping against the wall. His onyx eyes stared the bag down as it lay on the floor untouched. His dragged his fingers through his hair and scrunched his face in thought. What was he going to do about the preposition he received?
(Flashback)
"Uchiha Sasuke, we have a preposition for you, involving your rank."
Sasuke's eyes narrowed.
"I'm listening."
Yoki dropped his henge to reveal his blonde Sensei.
"We have a small job coming up and it's mostly centered around you. Now before we tell you anything. You gotta swear none of this leaves the room. We'd also like you to swear oath to Konoha."
"What for?" Sasuke asked cautiously. He knew they were treading on dangerous waters.
"What we are about to tell you has relevance to national security. Perhaps even global. So, Uchiha? What do you say?" Minato's voice dropped an octave.
"I swear loyalty to Konoha. Now tell me what this is about! Quit beating around the bush!"
Naruto's eyes flicked up from the floor. They were cold as steel causing Sasuke to take a step back.
"There is going to be a man. He's really dangerous and he will be sending Kabuto after you. Kabuto will try to bribe you into defecting. But, this man he's working for is what's really important. He managed to bypass a ANBU, a barrier, a kage, and a jounin, all to kill a slippery Sannin that couldn't be beaten, with a single stab. This man is very dangerous. And judging by Naruto's description, he has the gift to see future events."
"And what exactly am I going to do? Ignore kabuto's invitation? Why are you telling me this-"
"You're going to accept the invitation."
"What? I'm sorry, Hokage-sama, but I don't think-"
"Sasuke." Naruto interrupted.
"What."
"Calm down."
Sasuke suddenly realized how loud his voice got an how heavy his breathing became. His offensive stance clearly showed hostility and Sasuke shrunk back, regulating his breathing.
"S-sorry."
"Sasuke. Look. This is a very difficult job that only you can do. And in not saying that as a motivational pep talk. I really mean that there is no one else who can take this job."
"You want me to defect? Am I getting kicked out of the village?" Naruto almost cringed at the defeated voice of his student, a friend.
"No, Sasuke. You're not getting kicked out. What we want you to do is a long term mission undercover. Think of it as an S-ranked mission" Naruto's voice was filled with mischievousness as the blonde attempted to pick the mood up. But Sasuke's confused voice said otherwise.
"I don't...I don't follow."
"Sasuke. We want you to go undercover as a double agent and keep tabs on Kabuto and this strange man. It will require...a lot of stressful work. But, if you're up for it, you will be helping us tremendously."
Sasuke still looked unsure.
"We'll give you a week to decide, Sasuke. But before you go, there's also another thing we'd like to address."
Sasuke looked up at Naruto.
"Congrats on your promotion!"
Naruto shoved a chuunin vest into Sasuke's face.
"Wha-but I didn't-"
"We weren't sure if there was a spy in the room at the time and so we figured in case you accepted the mission, we would give you an alibi or reason to leave. What better cover for a supposedly power hungry brat than the fact that he failed the chuunin exams? So we're promoting you in secrecy. Congrats, Sasuke. I'm proud of you."
"Wha-what about my parents?"
"They know. They also know about your circumstance. If you want, you could talk to them about your decision. In fact, I encourage you to ask for their opinion."
Sasuke nodded and took the vest. He slowly tried the vest on, noticing the snug feeling of the vest and the smell of new clothes. The stiffness of the jacket made him stand up straight as he zipped the jacket up all the way. The collars were slightly tight but it was the way he liked it. He smiled a bit but quickly realized that he was still in the Hokage's office. He blushed and straightened up. Naruto chuckled before patting him on the back.
"You look sharp, Sasuke. Alright, I'll be off. Kaa-san wants me to do some weird civilian day stuff...see ya"
Naruto mock saluted before flashing away. Sasuke turned to the door before he was stopped by Jiraiya.
"Hold up, boy. You can't go out just yet in that chuunin vest. Also, I have a bag full of regulations and whatnot on being a spy. Naruto may have forgotten to mention this, but he's going to be your spymaster. Meaning, you report everything to him. Everything. Alright, put the vest away and hit the road, budd. Me and the Hokage got some grown up talk to go through."
Minato frowned as Jiraiya tossed a black duffle bag to Sasuke. Sasuke grabbed the bag and took his vest off before running back home to tell his parents.
(End of flashback)
Sasuke smiled just as he heard his parents arrive the main house from their jobs. He quickly ran downstairs not before grabbing his vest from the bag and slipping it on while he ran. He couldn't wait to see his parents faces.
Naruto laid on the ground, panting as the last of his clones dispersed. He stared up in the sky, not noting how dirty his civilian clothes were. He frowned a bit when he thought about sending Sasuke off undercover. It was pretty dangerous for a fresh chuunin, hell, what was he talking about. He was jounin already! If he could handle jounin, Sasuke could easily handle an S-ranked after his promotion to chuunin...or not. Naruto still couldn't shake off the feeling of dread. Was sending his student off really a good idea?
But then another thought hit him. He was no longer a sensei. He could no longer hold the right of their sensei now that two of them were chunins and one of them was an apprentice in the hospital. He couldn't teach them anything and he couldn't boss them around like he used to. He rested his elbow on his eyes and smirked. What was he thinking? Missing his students? As if. He should be glad, if anything else, that this annoying burden was finally over with. He dropped the smile and quickly got up, haphazardly brushing the dust off his already grey clothing before sprinting off to the Hospital, the Sarutobi compound, then the Uchiha compound. Who's in for ramen?
(A month long timeskip)
Naruto stretched his muscles as he flexed his arms above his head. He ruffled his hair a bit, no changing the forever-bedhead spikes. He turned to the clock on his bed stand and read 7:58. The light filtered through the blinds and Naruto squinted as a ray of sun landed straight on his eyes when he sat up.
"I put my alarm clock on, and I wake up 2 minutes early. This is ridiculou-"
"NARUTO!"
His eyes glazed over as he plopped back on his bed.
"I said...NARUTO! WAKE THE HELL UP BEFORE I BURN OFF ALL YOUR ICHA ICHA BOOKS AND YOUR JUTSU NOTES!"
His eyes that were slowly closing shot open and he sprang from his bed several feet in the air before landing in a heap on the floor next to his bed.
"I..I'M AWAKE! DON'T TOUCH THEM! NO NO NO! ANYTHING BUT THAT-"
Naruto stumbled out of his room before he darted for the kitchen. He couldn't feel the pull of any hiraishin seals and figured that his mom cleaned out all the seals. That trickster.
"DAMMIT! KAA-SAN! YOU WASHED OFF THE SEALS!"
A faint snickering was heard as Naruto dashed into the kitchen and nearly jumped out of his skin when the pop of confetti sprayed into his face and the popping sound rang into his ear. His eyes that snapped close slowly opened to reveal Minato in a pink apron holding a cake and Kushina holding a popped party popper.
"Happy Birthday, Naruto!" They chanted.
Naruto stood there gobsmacked in his orange shirt and grey pants for pajamas. His blonde hair was spikier than normal due to bedhead and a small drop of drool at the edge of his mouth.
"Wh-what?"
"Happy 14th Birthday!"
His shocked expression melted into a soft smile then a grin. He walked over to the dining table to start his celebration.
An:/The Namikaze Legend isn't over yet, perhaps maybe a few (10 or so, give or take) chapters before I start the shippuden sequel like I promised.
As you can see, I've started to announce his departure on his training trip. I won't specify really what he will do, perhaps a few detailed chapters on missions, but other than that, you won't hear much about the training trip. Unless, of course, you want me to make a separate story just to write about his missions and spy networking. I could pull it off but the sequel would have to wait, or it would be a trilogy. Your choice
POLL (TWO QUESTIONS)
Should I make a story describing Naruto's trip with Jiraiya?
A yes or no should be good enough, maybe a small note on the side as too how long or something
What should I name the sequel?
I have a few names starting up, but it'd be great if I had some of your input. A few that I have:
An Uzumaki's Legacy (AUL)
Inari's Prayer (IP)
A Whirlpool Among the Waves (AWAW)
As you can see, my creativity stops there. I was never one for naming, just imagine when I'm older and have kids. They will be named thing one and thing two...SO, if you don't want the fate of the sequel's title to be horrible, give me your input! Make em fast so I can create new ones based off of your suggestions and hold a real poll, as in tallies versus suggestions
So, I gave Sasuke a chance to be awesome and I also gave him an emotional side...oh wait, he's already emotional. Well, a positive emotional side. I also gave him a serious mission that will probably affect the outcome of the whole story. I haven't specified who the cloaked man was, but I'll give you a hint, it ain't Tobi, though Tobi and Madara will make their appearance, it ain't them.
Review Responses:
xdevil-childx: Hmmm, no cliffhanger this time.
Mathiasosx: Oh, lighten up. And I'm not being a dick if I just want to give you something to look forward too. Cliffhangers are a good thing as they build up excitement and anticipation. I didn't add a cliffhanger here because there is no need to have anticipation since it isn't an important fight or anything. Cheer up and enjoy!
SakuraFairy1990: Haha, it will be a cold day in hell before I kill Minato off.
TertiusArmada: Haha, I believe that the Rinnegan is indeed an overkilled idea. I was like...I want to give him a kekkei genkai but anything but the Rinnegan. So overused and quite frankly, overpowered. And I believe that this doujutsu is gonna be awesome
Guest: Thank you, TELL ME WHAT SUPERT MEANS
BlueEyedBabyy: Thanky! Hmm, you'll see :D
Guest: Don't tell me...YOU TOO!
The Keeper of Worlds: Haha, yes...But not this chapter...or this story it seems...
THE 7TH DEMON OF RAZGRIZ: Oh dear...it seems I cannot top off your evilness...for now. I'll surrender for now until I kill off the next character..you have been forewarned.
Tsuukiyomi: You missed not much...actually. But no worries, it's all good :D BUTTTTTTT your prediction is not true...not in this story...sorry! So close yet so far. But I'll let you squirm a bit before I answer anything...
blair27: Lol no. guess again.
EmilyLovesbooks: And you're an awesome reader. Thanks for reading!
Guest: I believe, I have not ruined anything with my kekkei genkai. It ain't yo overpowered doujutsu and it most definitely isn't as bad as a harem. Now I agree, Harem are a bit creepy...*shudders as well* but I felt that in order for something to happen in the future of my story, Naruto needed these new eyes. Now, I ain't gonna make him overpowered, so I don't see why you got your panties in a twist (figure of speech, don't get offended) Time skip is coming up and I do plan on having a little intro to Sage mode...but that's for another time.
entityoffire: HAHAHAA no. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA you'll just have to find out later
NamiNavigator: Haha, thanks. I hope the chapter wasn't too confusing but all in all, it was okay, right? Keep on reading!
Damon Furey: Haha, you're going to learn to hate this guy so well, I can just feel it.
Rinnegan97: Will do!
Foxxel: Hmm yes, if you read when Minato entered the barrier, he had amber eyes...too! AhAHAHAAHAHA yes, a family kekkei genkai.
Crazy3rik: Ah, you, sir, are quite fancy. Quite, indeed.
Guest: Ya'll driving me up the wall with insanity...WHAT DOES SUPERT MEAN!
Doomslayer10000: I'm glad it exceeded your expectation! It was what I aimed for and it is apparently what I got!
Diablitojack: Who said he was human? (whoops, jkjk) Its all part of the grand master plan that I have concocted in my head and will be expressed on ink. So no worries, fight is over, things will progress
IF YOU'RE HAVING TROUBLE UNDERSTANDING WHO THE FACELESS NARUTO WAS, READ THE NEXT REVIEW RESPONSE:
ExoticAngel97: ALrighty. Faceless Naruto is a bit of a confusing entity that followed him from death. Remember the boy he met in the void? Well it followed him. I guess you could say he's all of Naruto's negative thoughts. The fact that he's faceless might have been contributed from the fact that Naruto doesn't feel like he has an Identity, always in the shadow of his title of prodigy and the title of his father. But he's been removed for now by the kekkei genkai. I guess you could say he's the reason Naruto activated the new kekkei genkai.
RoyyBoyy: Yup, yup, I realized my mistake, and I have apologized. Hope you read those extra 10 chaps to see this response and hopefully my apology to the reader. Keep on reading!
Alright. I'm really sorry for the uber late update. But like I said above, I'm sick and my mom still sends me to school. Not that I can afford to skip a day anyways (wow, I'm already at an age where I fear that if I skip school, I'll miss something important. I probably didn't think like this freshman year..would have jumped the opportunity) So, I'm a bit off, and crazy. If I have any typos, like missing 'r's and other stuff, just don't blame me...
It was Naruto's birthday, I made him 14. Everyone else is turning 14 or something or another. Screw the canon timeline and screw everything. I do whatever the hell I want *immaturely stomps foot on ground* *puff cheeks out*
Aight, See ya!