Disclaimer: I don't mean to make it sad. Review if you think Dr. Nemur should be fired for animal abuse!


progris ripit 2- janury 31

im hungray. i cant find my way to that cheese. dr nemur sed that i only get my cheese if i pas. i dont like that idea. dr strauss still gives me food. i am hapy that dr strauss is my frend. i dont hav a lot of frends her.

i get mad at dr nemur. he says that a human wold b mor co oper a tive. i dont now wat any of that means. i get skared wen he yels at me. i dint do nothin rong. un les bein a mouse is a crime, i shold not b yelled at. dr. strauss all ways tells me that dr nemur has a lot of stress?

this morning, i saw a big plat of cheese. i want that cheese. they put it in my cage. i cocked my hed. wat is this for? dr. struass sed he stol it fom dr nemur. i lafed. dr nemur is goin to b a growch to day. i lafed hard.

i bit dr nemur. he dint like it. i bit him twice. he dint like that. he cursed me. this made me sad. i dont now wat a curse is but dr strauss herd and sed that dr nemur shold not say that. i dont now wat he was taking abowt. i was hav fun wen i bit dr nemur. he had fun to. that is y he cursed me! i am start to like this plac.

sr strauss nows now that i wil b smart. thats good. i want to b smart. dr strauss brings me cheese every morning. when nemur and bert rn't look, he givs me cheese. i am hapy. ther r other lab mice. dr struass sed i cant b with them. i asked him y? he sed nothin and kept starin at me. i sqeaked. wen he took me owt of my cage to feed me. i ran owt of his hands. i ran up a table. i ran past a cage. i fownd the other mice.

i sqeaked. they looked at me funny. like i looked icky. they sed that i was dum. i sed thank u. they sed that i was a runt. they sed that i was a mistake.i dont now y they sed the things they sed. it made me sad.

dr strauss picked me up. he sed that i dint b long over ther and i b long in my cage. he put me bac in my cage. he left the room. i dont now wat i did rong. i felt mad at me. may b i am dum. i now i am dum. thats y dr strauss is goin to mak me smart. thats wat i want. then those other mice cant make fun of me.

i de cide to be smart. i wil not b dum. i wil find the cheese. i wil mak dr nemur not a growch any mor.


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Spelling errors drive me nuts. I cant wait till the next few chapters. spoiler alert: there will be no more spelling errors.

~Raven