I'd like to take the time to thank the encouraging reviews, except a recent paragraph which both confused and infuriated me. First of all; The movie is not in Kirby's point of view, so how would YOU know how Kirby feels about Charlie, the movie doesn't show that. Second; she can't just abandon her feelings over betrayal, if you were an actual human you'd know the feeling. She's mad at him, really fucking pissed at what he did, that doesn't mean she loathes him. This is an AU (alternate universe) so I will jumble around the movie to fit the story to how I see fit, that's the beauty of Fanfiction. How would you talk to a person you loved? They are talking to each other in the "stupid" way because it's awkward between them. Again; if you were human you'd know this. Please enlighten me further as to what normal is. Kirby still acts the same way after losing her friends, almost dying, seeing her best friend make out with her love interest? I'd absolutely love to see YOUR story of events. I'd like to see your realism; the cold-hearted Kirby that doesn't give a shit about anyone else. I don't think anyone would like that.
Apologies to those who may expect a chapter; I need to tweak with the next chapter more with spelling and adding more detail. This person really ruined my day with their lack of fanfiction-understanding and pure rudeness. Thank you for reading (If you do) I 'll have the next chapter up by Saturday.
Bye bye,
Lilly