This is a story I wrote a few years ago on a different website. I thought I'd post what I have so far on here and possibly continue this story. Let me know what you guys think.

Hawaii. My new home. A part of me never thought that this day would come. I had spent the last five years travelling the world. At age 18 I broke free from the world my controlling parents had made for me. I haven't spoken to them since. In the last five years I have never felt so incredibly free, it was exhilarating. But now, I finally felt the desire to settle down a little bit, and stop travelling so much. So here I am, in Hawaii. I chose this place so that I could be close to my big brother, I hadn't seen him since my graduation when he told me that if I didn't get away from my parents that I would suffocate myself. I owe everything I've experienced in the past few years to him. I couldn't wait to see him, he would be so surprised. It's been a year since I've had the chance to see him. That was far too long. I was ready to make up for lost time.

The first thing I saw when I walked into the Five-0 headquarters was a very pleasant looking woman at sitting behind a reception desk. As I walked towards the counter she looked up and smiled at me before greeting me.

"Hello, may I help you with something?"

"Yes, thank you. I was wondering if Detective Danny Williams is here? I'd like to speak to him."

"Detective Williams is actually on his way back now, it shouldn't be more than five or ten minutes. Would you like to wait or would you like me to give him a message?"

"I'll wait thank you. Is there a restroom or somewhere I could freshen up a bit while I wait?"

"Yes, just go through those doors on your left, take a right and it's the door right in front of you. Feel free to leave your luggage here by the desk, I can watch it for you."

"Thank you so much. I'll be back in just a moment."

-McGarrett's POV-

"I really think you need to get a girlfriend McGarrett."

"What? Why lol."

"Because, maybe then you'll learn to be a little less reckless and follow the rules more lol."

Oh please. Danny is ALWAYS saying this to me. Why he thinks a girlfriend would make me less reckless is beyond me. He does have a point though. Its been way too long since I've been with anyone. I haven't had a real relationship since Catherine and that was just a huge mess.

"Please Danno, a girl wouldn't change that, why are we even talking about this lol."

"Oh! Detective Williams, theres a young woman here to see you. She just stepped into the restroom to freshen up. Would you like me to send her up when she comes back out."

"Nah, thanks Jenny, I'll just wait."

"A young woman huh? New girlfriend?"

"No, definitely not. No clue who it could be."

At that moment, my mind went blank and I heard nothing going on around me because the most beautiful woman I have ever seen walked through the doors behind Danny. She was slim, blonde with a glowing tan, legs for days, curves in all the right places and about 6 inches shorter than me. She was the ideal woman. I was just about to walk towards her when she looked up and smiled before saying something that broke me out of my trance.

"DANNY!"

"Hannah? Is that you?"

"EEE! Danny it's so good to see you! I missed you so much! You must be McGarrett, it's so great to finally meet you!"

"Uhh, yeah, Steve McGarrett, nice to meet you Hannah. How do you guys know each other?"

"Well Steve, this beautiful woman right here, is Hannah. My baby sister."

Sister. SISTER? Shit. There is no chance in hell I could go for this girl now. Siblings are definitely off limits. Danny would never go for it. All hell would break did my perfect woman have to be the little sister of my best friend and partner? I mean that would be a total disaster. Theres no way Danny would be okay with this. DAMN!

-Hannah's POV-

I walked out of the bathroom only to spot the most gorgeous guy in the world staring right back at me. I have honestly never felt such attraction to someone in my life. He was tall with dark hair and the most amazing eyes. He was built, not too big though just the perfect sized muscles that just make you want to melt. Jesus I needed to get ahold of myself. It was then I saw who was standing next to him. Danny Williams. My brother.

"DANNY!"

"Hannah?"

The look on his face was priceless. I don't think I've ever seen him look so shocked and speechless. My heart felt whole again the minute I saw him. I knew for sure now that coming to Hawaii was the right thing to do. It didn't matter where I went, wherever Danny was that would be home to me.

"EEE! Danny it's so good to see you! I missed you so much! You must be McGarrett, it's so great to finally meet you!"

The ridiculously handsome man looked over at me with a stunned expression, probably because I knew who he was without even being introduced. That and I can be kind of intense sometimes. I seriously need to find a way to calm myself down in situations like this. I'll probably end up giving someone a heart attack someday.

"Uhh, yeah, Steve McGarrett, nice to meet you Hannah. How do you guys know each other?"

"Well Steven, this beautiful woman right here, is Hannah. My sister."

"Wow, Danno, I can see where all the good looks in the family went."

Oh. Wow. I think my face must be on fire. There is no way I am not blushing ten thousand shades of red right now. My heart fluttered when he gave me a sexy sweet grin. I could die happy just to have him smile at me that way.

"Ha ha very funny. Anyways, what are you doing here Hannah? I thought you were in Peru or something?"

"I was, then I was in Chili, Brazil, Australia, Fiji, and most recently Greece. I decided it was time to take a break from travelling the world and come see my favorite brother. I was thinking of staying here and settling down for a while."

"Really? Hannah! That would be so great! Where are you staying?"

"Actually, I have no idea. I just got here like an hour ago. I was hoping I could stay with you."

"Han. I would love that but I just don't have to room for you, Gracie is staying with me for a couple of weeks while her mom is off on some business trip with husband number two. The only extra room I have will be taken up by her."

"Oh. Hmm. No worries I will figure something out."

SHIT! I was counting on being able to stay with Danny. The trip to Hawaii cost me the majority of the money I had left from the odd jobs I'd picked up during my travels. I don't know how long I will be able to make it without money. Seems like I'm going to have to find a job quicker than I was expecting.

"She can stay with me."

"What!?"

I looked over at Steve who was smiling at me and then to my brother who screamed and proceeded to look completely shocked and possibly angry at the suggestion. Part of me is really hoping that Danny will go for this. I mean the man standing in front of me is the epitome of Sexiness. What girl wouldn't want a chance to get to know this guy?

"Danno, I have the extra room at the house, it would be no problem. Plus then you know she'll be somewhere safe and not on the streets."

"That would be so great, I really appreciate it! Danny, what do you say? Is that okay with you?"

"Ugh, fine. BUT if you so much as touch her McGarrett, I will break your legs. Understand me? My baby sister is completely off limits to you."

"Understood."

DAMN IT! STUPID OLDER BROTHERS! We'll just see about this. I'm not going to let Danny stop me from getting to know this guy.

"Danny, I'm not a baby anymore. Relax. So McGarrett, when can I move in? I don't have much, just the few bags I brought with me. And I promise to clean up after myself, you won't even know I'm there."

I shot him my signature grin and could see him swallow hard before he was even able to respond to that. Hopefully for my brothers sake I wasn't being too obviously. Just slightly flirty.

"Danny and I just have a couple things left to do here and then I can take you over."

"Hannah, why don't you come up with us and you can meet Kono and Chin, the rest of the team."

"That sounds great! Lets go!"

And now the fun begins. Hello new life. I think that this is where I was always meant to find myself. Who wouldn't be happy being somewhere this warm and beautiful. It would be like being on a vacation 24/7 365 days a year. Now I just have to figure out how to get one Steve McGarrett to like me…..