If I had words to make a day for you... I would make that day last for all time! That's a little snippet from a song I heard in the movie 'Babe'. I really love that movie, it's adorable (I *sob* don't own the movie Babe *sob* though...)

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Epic Gamer: Yes, I did receive it... But it's a bit hard to understand, would you mind revising it? Thank you.

WOO! TEAM SKY! KYDA AND IRSHA! CHAPTER SEVENTEEN~!

Meanwhile, With The Oblivious Iris And Shadow...

"Hey Shadow, do you notice anything weird about KyDa?" Iris asks, looking over Shadow's shoulder at Kyrie and Dan, who were still dancing but looked a bit out of it.

Shadow looks back. "They're still dancing, aren't they?"

"Yeah... But something seems... Off. Just look at their eyes. They lack their usual spirit," Iris whispers, hoping no one overhears her.

"Yeah, you're right... Wait a second, where's Sara?" Shadow looks around, looking for the elusive indigo haired girl.

"I don't know, maybe she went outside?" Iris suggests.

"We should check." Shadow grabs Iris's hand and pulls her towards the door.

Meanwhile, In Frozen Time...

Kyrie unfreezes Dan and stares at him.

"Dan. I know you just wanted to protect me, but... I need to fight my own battles. Please just stay back," She whispers. Dan nods slightly and steps back, allowing Kyrie to fight.

Sienna stares at her, and unfreezes herself, smirking.

"You can't win, you're too weak," Sienna growls.

"Just because I don't have the strongest magic... DOESN'T MEAN I CAN'T WIN!" Kyrie summons a scythe and begins to run at Sienna.

"WHAT THE-?!" Sienna swiftly jumps to the side.

"I WILL NOT LOSE!" Kyrie takes another swing at Sienna, and it cuts her dress's skirt, and knocks her to the floor.

Sienna slowly stands up. "Oh... I see... So that's how it is..." She mutters, an evil aura forming around her.

In the blink of an eye, Sienna is suddenly right behind Kyrie. "FREEZE!" She shouts, freezing time around Kyrie.

"YOU CANNOT DEFEAT ME!" Sienna screams, punching Kyrie to the ground.

"I AM A WHITE KILLER! YOU WILL NOT WIN!" Sienna kicks Kyrie in the ribs, making her cough up blood all over the marble floor of the ballroom.

"KYRIE!" Dan shouts, and runs over to the pinkette lying on the ground.

"It's too late... She has lost." Sienna smiles sinisterly at her victory.

"She may have lost... But I haven't." Dan stands up, a vengeful aura forming around him.

Meanwhile, With Iris And Shadow...

"She's not out here, I guess." Iris walls over to Shadow, and the two walk back into the ballroom, hand in hand.

But before they begin to dance again, Iris notices something and gasps.

Shadow looks at her, concerned.

Slowly, Iris points to a puddle of red. "That wasn't there before... Was it?" She whispers, staring at Shadow.

"Something weird is going on..." Shadow murmurs.

Meanwhile, In Frozen Time...

"You really think you can beat me? Even after what happened to your little girlfriend?" Sienna smirks.

"She's not my girlfriend... But maybe someday she will be... Because I'll do anything to protect her," Dan says. Kyrie, hearing this, smiles a bit, despite her harsh injuries.

"This is certain death for you." Sienna rushes forward. But Dan is ready. He creates an ice and water blade and slashes Sienna's arm.

"AGH! YOU WRETCHED CHILD!" She screeches.

"Child?" Dan asks, confused. "What child? All I see is an adorable, amazing, pinkette girl, an awesome, strong black haired guy with a knife, and an ugly old hag with indigo hair and grey eyes."

"OLD HAG?!" Sienna leaps at Dan, a crazy look in her eyes.

"I mentioned I had a knife, didn't I?" Dan pulls a knife out of his belt and slashes Sienna again, making her fall to the floor, defeated.

"You said it would be hard..." Dan mutters.

"URGH!" Sienna screams.

"Now... I want you to unfreeze time, and lead us to your guild." Sienna stares at Dan.

"I SAID NOW!"

Sienna quickly scrambles to get up, and unfreezes the time. Dan runs over to Kyrie and helps her up.

Meanwhile, With Iris And Shadow...

"SHADOW! LOOK!" Iris points to where Dan, the defeated Sienna, and the bloody Kyrie had suddenly appeared.

"WHAT HAPPENED?!" Shadow shouts as he and Iris run over to their teammates. The crowd parts to let them pass, but continues staring.

"Sara... Sienna... Dark guild... Evil..." Dan murmurs, but then collapses onto the floor.

"ALRIGHT PEOPLE, WE NEED MEDICAL ATTENTION OVER HERE!" Shadow shouts.

"I think I can help!" A young girl with wavy waist-length black hair and black eyes in a frilly loli dress runs up to Team Sky.

"Are you sure...?" Shadow looks uncertain.

"I'm sure. My mom taught me a little about medical treatment." The girl smiles.

Before Shadow can say another suspicion, Iris covers is mouth and smiles at the girl. "Ok. What's your name?" She asks.

"My name's Alice." Alice smiles and gets down on her hands to help Dan and Kyrie.

Two Hours Later...

"See? I told you I could do it." Alice smiles, looking proud of herself and her actions.

"Yeah... Guess you were right..." Shadow mutters. Iris elbows him.

"I'm sorry... About not believing you..." Shadow adds, glaring at Iris.

"Huh...? What...?" Dan begins to wake up.

Ok... Do you think the KyDa was:

A. Perfect

B. Ok

C. Rushed

Please tell me!

Whenever I meant to write Shadow I wrote Apocalypse, and whenever I meant to write Iris I wrote Rachael... OMG! RASE IS TAKING OVER MY MIND!

Ok, so to really get the feel of Sienna's hair color, I looked up the color indigo. And then I realized this: WENDY'S HAIR IS INDIGO!

I think it's time to go over the villain ages:

Akino: 16

Riley: 17

Adela: 15

Sienna: 19

Venus: 18

Collette: 19

Envy: 19

Nero: 30

Orphan: 25

Ray: 16

And Asura is actually 35...

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Guys, I have something to tell you all. I'm going on vacation, so I won't be able to update until next Thursday. Sorry.

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