The Musings of an Umbreon
Why, hello there again! Have I ever told you how much I like chocolate? Probably not. But chocolate is delicious. I mean, seriously. It tastes like.. chocolate. And fried kittens. You never saw that last part, got it? I don't even know what kittens taste like. I mean, what do they seriously taste like? Who in the right mind would eat a kitten? I sure wouldn't. I mean, I'm obviously in the right mind, can you not tell? I'm 100% perfectly sane. Enough about me. Onto the review!
Pikachu's Crush
Chapter 1: Feelings
Author: Fireflare249
Description: Pikachu is starting to have feelings towards Buneary. But she is starting to lose hope. Will Pikachu confess his feelings for the rabbit pokemon or will he mess up and lose her forever. This is my first fic so be nice Rated T for mild language Pikachu x Buneary
blah = human talking
(blah) = pokemon talking
blah = thinking
It was just another day in the unova region and Ash, Cylan, and Iris were waiting at the pier in Castelia city.
Cylan? No.
"What are we doing here again?" Iris asked and Ash sighed
"I told you we are here to wait for my friend Dawn, remember?"
Suddenly they see a ship dock at the pier, and people start coming off.
There she is! Ash said, very happily, pointing to a girl with blue hair. DAWN! Ash yells
"Hey Ash" Dawn says
Dawn runs up and giving him a hug
Hey Pikachu Dawn says
"Pika Pika" (Hi Dawn)
All of a sudden they here yelling.
EEVEE (HELP ME)
No.
They all turn around to see an eevee running from a teem plasma goon
"Team Plasma" Ash, Cylan, and Iris says together while dawn looked confused
"who"
"Like teem rocket they are bad guys who try to take pokemon" Cylan explained
"oh is that so" Dawn said looking quite annoyed
"ya and I think I'll start by taking your pokemon" the goon sneered
"Your not taking any ones pokemon, go Buneary" Dawn
Dawn throws a pokeball and in a beam of light a small rabbit like pokemon comes out in a white beam of light
Bun bun (I'm ready) she said determined
The goon growled. "Go sandile"
Ash and Dawn together "Pikachu/Buneary use iron tail/ice beam!"
Pikachu's and Buneary's attacks hit dead on sending the sandile flying and the goon running
Just then a boy comes running up
"Eevee!" he said happily as eevee jumped into his arms
They turn around to find that the boy about Ash's age
I don't even.. what? I quit. Bye.
"Thank you so much" he said gratefully. Ash smiled
"No problem"
While the others talk Pikachu looks over to see Buneary and he walks up to her
"Hi Buneary"
Buneary jumps then sees its only pikachu
"Oh hi Pikachu" she said blushing a little
She gives him a hug
"Its good to see you again."
*blushes unnoticed by his red cheeks* "You too" he replied
Buneary then runs back to Dawn.
"Why am I blushing, I don't like Buneary that way... Do I?"
What. Why would this happen? Why me? *sobs in a corner* I give this story... a.. 16/100. I mean, really. The paragraphing is terrible, the lines are like, 8 worlds long, things just happen, nothing makes any sense. Really, why? Anyways, again, give me suggestions and the like. Ta-ta!