A Big Bet in a Small World

by FaeAugusta

Alois and Ciel are rivals. Ciel needs information that he can only get from Alois, but on a tangent, the two make a bet that if the randomly chosen pauper on the street can fall in love with Alois in 3 weeks, Ciel will serve Alois as a servant for a day, if not Ciel get's his information. Curiously, they later discover they're acquainted. What's in store for this troublesome trio?

5. AN Feedback time!

Hehe, hey guys, I've been super busy with things and I remember that I made a resolution that I would make this story friggin awesome and looking back of it, I did seem like I was trying too hard to be ominous, and now that I look at it I feel like giggling, but I'm not going to change it. I want to look back at this as a reminder of my progress as a writer. I will however be changing my style a bit in the future chapters if it is demanded.

Any reviews you give me would be greatly appreciated because right now, even though it's the beginning of the school year, I'm already stressed since it's my senior year and this year I am very involved in tons of advanced classes and extracurricular activities like homecoming skits or clubs.

I remember writing this right before school started and jotting it down in a few nights so I wouldn't forget the idea, I'm guessing I got very pooped out at the time and something somehow didn't click and my intents just didn't come across, but after all that good stuff you probably don't really care about, back to the story!

I will replace this authors note as soon as I can but I just want to let you guys know I am super busy and I was and still am doing this for fun. Looking at the feedback and views, I would love it if you guys could help me steer the story in the right direction, or give me some awesome ideas I an add into the story.

The story is in NO WAY near done yet.

In the meantime, I'm going to tune back in soon and I hope to have at least one review for every chapter I post, that would be quite lovely thank you, but once I find that there is one review, I will be sure to post a chapter that is the length of all of the words in the past FOUR chapters combined, rounded up(3K words)! Sound good?

After that, I will hope to see that as I post more chapter the number of reviews I have will balance out with the number of chapters I post. I will be sure of that, I'll have everything ready, because I write quite frequently, so you have no need to worry, once I see those reviews, those new chapters will be posted and all you have to wait for is for the website to allow you to read it!

I will be gone this weekend, but will be tuning back in with the world-I have no internet access where I am going- by the 29th.

In the meantime, hope to see that feedback on what ya think~

~M.H.M.N.