Parallel chapter 2

"Wait, so does that mean we're in her dreams?" Kiba questioned
"Precisely" Kakashi said appearing out of thin air,
the three boys were momentarily shocked from their sensei's entrance.
"So where is she?" Kakashi asked " and why is it do dark in here?"
"It's because she's asleep" Sasuke pointed to the sleeping Ruiizu,
"Okay here's the problem Ruiizu won't awaken until she knows we are real" Kakashi said
"How are we supposed to do that?" Naruto asked
"Yeah, anytime we tried to talk to her, she ignored us" Kiba complained
"But we know she can see and hear us" Sasuke added.
Which was all true, Ruiizu hadn't been asleep or if she was tier conversation had woken her up. She thought about what they had said in her head, well I'm not going to talk to something that's not there, if your 4 it's cute but at 13 it's a trip to the therapist.
Without thinking she mumbled "would you four talk quietly please, I'm trying to sleep" she had propped herself up on her elbows.
All four of them looked at her in shock, Kakashi looked at her and blushed as her pyjama vest top was too big for her and fallen and was revealing a lot, but the boys hadn't seemed to notice, they were more interested in the fact that she had talked to them.
"Is what you said the truth" Ruiizu asked Kakashi after yawning,
"Yes and it's important that you do wake up" Kakashi told her
"Can you prove it?" Ruiizu asked
the four looked at each other when Kiba said "I got it, Naruto kiss her!"
Naruto looked flustered and stumbled over his words "w-why do i-i h-ave to d-do it?"
"Well Kakashi can't do it and I won't so... Kiba?"
Kiba flushed
"Yeah and it was your idea, so you have to do it" Naruto added
what are they arguing about? Ruiizu thought to herself still half asleep.
Surprisingly Kiba admitted defeat! But then said mockingly "fine, I'll kiss the cute blond!" With a smirk he went and sat on the edge of the bed
Wait he just say he was gonna kiss me? Ruiizu screamed mentally
"So what if that doesn't work?" Sasuke was asking
"Then we come up with another idea, but for now let's see if this woks"
Kakashi replied in his emotionless way.
But Kiba was ignoring them he had sat on the edge of the girl's bed, he leant in to her to kiss her but just before he did he whispered "this'll prove I'm real" and kissed the girl.
Ruiizu had blushed "bastard" she said Kiba looked shocked because that wasn't the reaction he had expected, a sudden tiredness came over her "that was... my... first... kiss..." And with that she fell asleep.
Kiba heard a low chuckle from behind him "wow good one Kiba, I'll prove I'm real, and to make it worse it was her first kiss" Sasuke was saying sarcastically while laughing.
Kakashi poofed out and the three boys started to feel... very... sleepy...

I just wanted to say this is my first story so i'm really new to this, any constructive criticism is appreciated.

if i get a couple of views and reviews I'll try to continue the story.

if there are any mistakes i'm sorry, i'm still a newbie