One more thing: How do you think my writing's improved since I started this story? I know the first chapter sucked, and the first ten or so were also not very well written. But I started to like writing more and more; now it's a regular hobby of mine. I tried to improve my writing style to make it easier to understand. I don't want to pressure anybody, but feedback is one of the things that I LOVE and it also helps me understand what I'm doing wrong or right. I just want to know, because as my story gets more serious and deep I want to make it more smoothly written.
Thanks so much. If you are even just reading this one chapter, you're the best!