Updates:
It's been a long time since I last updated this story and some of you are probably under the impression that I've just up and dropped the story. If you are, then you're half-right. I haven't dropped the story, but it's true I haven't worked on it in a while. I've gotten distracted; things have come up, etc, etc.
But I am not done with this story. I intend to finish this story. If I'm ever going to get over this can't-ever-finish-a-story problem of mine, then I've got to start somewhere. However, after looking back at the story there are things that bother me and I cover most of this in the update on my profile, but I'll repeat them here. The character interaction is what's been bugging me the most. I didn't intend for the story to take such an odd left turn when I introduced Renia into the story. I think the main mistake I made was having the three of them living in the same house, even if only temporarily. I also don't think I did a good job keeping Virilia in character... So yeah. I'm going to be rewriting some chapters. I'm not going to change the first, second or third chapters much, if at all, I've no real problem with those. But chapter four, five and six will be getting edited. Heavily.
Expect to see me re-upload said chapters in a few days.
Until then. Jya~
Drake