SO GUYS i have a problem i was reading a story on here and i forgot its name and i didnt get to finish it! The plot was Ikruka,Gaara,Kankuro,Temari, Naruto and Dedrera were all brothers and sister they moved to a new village by there adopted mothers death wise granny Chiyo they ran a bakery/dance hall it was a yaoi fanfiction but i cant remember its name :( if anyone knows plzzzz tell me.


Chapter 11 : Naruto's dream becomes a reality?


"Heard my name being called having a dream about me dope?" Sasuke said looking at Naruto who turned bright red.

"I don...don't know what your talking about teme. Naruto said looking away.


"So dope you gonna let me in or are you just going to stand in the door way like a idiot?" Sasuke said looking at Naruto with a smirk.

"Umm...my house is not the cleanest i don't know if you wanna com...mmmnnn" Naruto said as Sasuke pushed Naruto into his house shutting the door and taking Naruto in a deep kiss. "Mmnnnnn" Naruto moaned into Sasuke's kissed in till they had to break away for air.

"So dope what were you dreaming about that had you saying my name? Guessing by your face at the moment i bet its something hentai right?" Sasuke said with a smirk as he saw Naruto's flustered face.

"N...nooo i was not.." Naruto said trying to hide his face because Sasuke could tell when he was lieing.

"Naruto i know you were this right here is responding to me from just a kiss." Sasuke said feeling the bulge in Naruto's pants growing.

"I can explain umm nnnnnn." Naruto said being taken into another deep kiss and getting carried to his bed. Breaking free from the kiss once Sasuke pushed him down onto the bed he look up to Sasuke confused. "Sasuke?" Naruto said looking into Sasuke lust filled eyes.

"Nar..Naruto i cant hold back I'm taking you now!" Sasuke said pulling Naruto into another deep kiss and slipping his tongue in to explore Naruto's mouth.

"Mnn Sasuke" Naruto said between breaths. Trying to push Sasuke off of him only to be pinned down and bitten on the neck leaving a nice bite mark.

"Heh now i have marked you as mine" Sasuke pulling Naruto into another kiss while slipping his hand into Naruto's pants. Fighting Naruto's tongue to gain more access to his mouth Sasuke gripped Naruto's hard member and stroked it a few times making Naruto moan. It drove Sasuke crazy.

"Ahh Sasuke" Naruto said finally giving into his lust and letting Sasuke do what he wanted. He felt Sasuke start stroking his member again. He didn't want to be played with he wanted Sasuke NOW! "Sasuke i want y..you st...stop playing" Naruto said trying to catch his breath from the last kiss.

"Hn really now." Sasuke looking at Naruto seeing his lust filled eyes. Sasuke quickly started to take off their clothes in till his clothes were everywhere and started to suck on Naruto's neck.

"Ahh" Naruto moaned as Sasuke found his sweet spot and sucked on it lightly before biting down on it making Naruto cry out in pleasure.

Taking out a bottle of lube Sasuke spread it over 3 of his fingers took Naruto into another kiss and pushed one finger into Naruto's twitching hole. Naruto cried out in pain. Sasuke waited in till Naruto calmed down a little before taking him into another kiss and thrusting his finger a little deeper Naruto moaned in pleasure this time making Sasuke add another finger. Naruto was going crazy from it he knew knew it felt this good to be fingered. As Sasuke added in the third finger Naruto was rocking with every trust trying to get Sasuke fingers deeper. Sasuke stopped thrusting his fingers in and out making Naruto whine at the sudden emptiness in his whole only to feel something bigger much bigger trying to penetrate it. Naruto's eyes locked onto Sasuke's.

"Ready?" Sasuke said looking at Naruto making sure he was ready for his big member.

"Hurry up and put it in" Naruto said rubbing against Sasuke's penis making his precum spread across his hole. "Ahhh" Naruto moaned as Sasuke penetrated him.

Sasuke started to trust faster and faster making Naruto moan like crazy.

"Mmm Sasuke deeper" Naruto said locking his legs out his partners waist forcing Sasuke's penis to go deeper making them both cry out in pleasure.

Sasuke went wild with lust and started to slam into Naruto making his moans get louder.

"Sa..Sasuke im gonna come soon" Naruto said between moans.

"Same lets come together" Sasuke said quicking his pace so his pelvis was hitting into Naruto.

After about 10 more trusts Naruto came with a loud moan followed by Sasuke who buried his head into Naruto's neck and released inside of Naruto. Sasuke fell down onto Naruto who was catching his breath.

"That...was amazing" Sasuke said trying to catch his breath.

"Uhuh" Naruto said pushing Sasuke off oh him so he could roll over onto his stomach from the pain is his ass at the moment he didn't want to be laying on it.

Sasuke and Naruto both drifted off to sleep from their exhausting experience.


O_O so guys how was the scene did i do a decent job on it? if you see something you think i should rephrase or change tell me anything to make it better would help. Lol and yes LOOK THE YAOI PART.