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...Chapter 2
'Finally' I thought to myself as I slowly opened the parcel
WHAT! Its empty , I felt tears in my eye's I saved so much to get this and ARRGH!
'Don't cry' I heard an unfamiliar voice say , 'I'm not crying I'm sweating from my eyes ' I replied fake laughing 'that's strange!' The voice replied 'I know it is!' I replied beginning to actually laugh how can this voice believe me 'who are you anyway and where are you' I asked 'I'm your parcel look at me' the 'parcel' said I did as it asked and suddenly I saw colourful ripples within the parcel I reached to touch it then suddenly I felt myself go into the parcel around me was a room , if it was a room , filled with all sorts of bright colours sickening if I was to be completely honest. 'Where am I' I asked 'you wanted a Hetalia merchandise well I'm giving you something better you're being taking to the Hetalia dimension' the voice replied 'are you joking?!' I asked 'Nope ' I heard the room reply , I screamed with excitement 'thank you! Thank you!' I suddenly felt tears fall down my eyes 'you should control your eye sweating though! People can think you're crying' the room suddenly said which made me laugh a little I nodded wiping my tears well according to the voice 'sweat'!
'And I have given you the power to fly only however in the Hetalia dimension , and any other dimension apart from your own!' The voice continued ... Wait is this a dream because if this is I don't ever want to wake up!
'Excuse me!' I heard a faint voice say 'excuse me ! I'm so sorry' I heard the voice continue . Suddenly I felt my eyes open to find a pair of amber-ish eyes staring at me ... And soft lips touching my lips . I pushed the person off me , and I felt tears come into my eye's again ! Why do I keep crying?! 'Sorry bella' I heard a voice say in an italian accent , it can't be ?! I stood up to find italy ! THE italy on the floor injured because of me , still why did he kiss me ? I helped him up and hugged him 'whats wrong bella?' Italy asked I just stayed quiet and hugged him , he was so warm & his clothes were so soft it was just like a dream. 'My name is Gail , you must be italy' I told italy who stared at me confused to how I knew his name. 'How do you-'
'Long story, story short I'm not from the same place as you' I replied smiling 'Sorry for pushing you and that its just that you took my first kiss ' I continued 'oh sorry! For taking it! ' Italy replied. 'Are you a country?' Italy came to ask 'Nope' I replied smiling 'then how?' Italy replied confused 'Let's just say I fell from the sky' I said laughing , 'where we going'
'I guess to the meeting so we can discuss what to do with you'
'I hope they won't kill me or anything'
'I'll make sure that doesn't happen' italy replied smiling
I wonder if I can fly now , suddenly I felt my body float into the air , I began to move left and right , up and down even in circles! 'I can't control this' I cried
'You can just close your eye's and imagine yourself soaring in the sky like the birds in the sky in your dimension' I heard that same voice say , again I did as it said and I opened my eyes to find myself flying ! Below me was a beautiful garden filled with roses all different colours and Large tree's . 'Gail! Where you going?' Italy exclaimed confused to how I was flying
'You gotta check this out Italy!' I exclaimed from above , I swooped down and grabbed italy by the arms , to my disbelief italy was actually really light . 'Quanto piuttosto' I heard Italy suddenly say 'huh?' I let out 'that didn't sound english'
'It wasn't english! It's italian for how pretty' Italy replied laughing at me. ' Oh!' I replied laughing myself this is too perfect to be reality , me and italy flying in the sky laughing together.
Suddenly I heard gunshots ...
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Jazz: Now you're gonna die all because of anime :(
Gail : I won't don't worry & someone's missing me already
Jazz: Not really ( nervously laughing) You were flying I want to fly too!
Crazycoco31: Me too :(
Gail : I was chosen :p
Crazycoco31 : I can always take that away from you
(Evil grin)
Gail & jazz : You wouldn't?
Crazycoco31 : Naa ... For now ;P
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