Hmm I wonder how to make a character connect to a reader nice review Pheonix hoshika! Now I can't think on what to do! I'll just keep going with the flow for now :)
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Chapter 3
I heard gunshots and it wasn't my illusion! I suddenly felt a bullet pierce through my skin ... the pain it hurts it reminds me of a time ...
'Fatso!'
'Green giant'
'Wanna be'
Why are they all attacking me with these words , I felt rulers hitting me , the pain was as harsh as the words which seemed to be piercing at my heart. I won't cry I'm not that weak! I won't give in to them!
'Why isn't she crying?'
'She doesn't have a heart remember she's heartless'
'Oh yeah remember what she did to tino'
I didn't do it on purpose I didn't want to hurt him , I got angry , I - I -I
'I-I-I' I suddenly felt tears fall from my eyes as my body fell rapidly towards the ground as my blood began to flow out of my body like a river. 'Gail?!' I heard italy shout from the ground . I felt my body slow down I slowly fell towards him 'How come - ' I asked
Still floating down 'I fell but I didn't get hurt ' He replied laughing a little till he noticed that I was bleeding 'You're-'
'Its okay I guess I got shot' I replied giggling a little trying not to make italy worried. My feet finally touched the grass.
'Who shot it anyway?' I asked 'It looks like Britain's bullet' Italy replied 'Let's go there before the meting after all it is closer' italy said guiding me towards a mansion ahead of us 'So where you from you look a little to tanned to be from spain or mexican are you from that place Germany was on about the other day ... Afi - afi - afri'
'Africa' I replied laughing at italy's attempt on saying it , the pain from my wound began to hurt even more. 'I'm from Congo its a place there in africa maybe France or Belgium knows about it! But I was born in England' I replied trying to distract myself from the pain but it wasn't working 'Oh! Let's visit it some time' italy replied 'mmm' I nodded as I felt more blood slip out of my body , trying my hardest to smile , I don't want to be a burden on Italy . 'I'd never think that you are from Britain's place' Italy continued as he knocked on Britain's door , Finally I'm meeting the Britain , if I was to tell this to the anime club they'd be SO jealous I got to meet THE Britain ! He isn't my favourite character but still. 'Who is it?!' I heard Britain say from behind the door 'Its me Italy' Italy replied in a cheery voice 'Oh it-a-ly' Britain replied in a mischievous voice I could feel an evil vibe coming from him from behind his door! what is he planning? 'yes it-a-ly' Italy replied smiling even more
Britain opened the door with the most weirdest of smiles .
'Welcome Italy -' 'and who is this?' Britain asked staring at me. He noticed the wound on my shoulder the blood kept slipping out of me soon britain became a blurred image which lead me into pure darkness.
'Gail!Gail' I heard italy's voice say , I instantly opened my eyes 'she lost so much blood she passed out' I heard britain say 'Britain is that really you?!' I exclaimed I'm getting over excited I might collapse again but this time from over excitement 'Yes and how do you kn-'
'I am a huge fan , I was born in your place' I interrupted smiling a bit too much maybe he might find that annoying
'Fan' Britain looked confused
'My place?' Even more confused , I smiled at him 'I'll stop! so when's the meeting ?'
'Soon , and I'm sorry for shooting the bullet I thought you were an aircraft of some sort' Britain was able to put a small smile on his face which was actually nice to see it made me smile even more and I'm not the smiling sort!
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Jazz : Look who's getting all smiley
Gail: shullup you spasticated monkey !
Jazz: ouch that hurts *sarcastically*
Gail : Really let's see what else hurts (comes closer in kicking position)
Jazz : don't please I'll buy sweets for you for a week
Gail: make it a month and we have a deal
Jazz : the things I do because of you
Gail : I know you love me man! Too bad I can't say the same
Crazycoco31: aww look at these lovebirds
Jazz & gail : shullup
Crazycoco31 : *goes into a corner * (upset!)
Jazz : don't we think that we should cheer her up?
Gail : I think we'll leave her be for the time being , seeing her upset is kinda sad though
Crazycoco31: My own friends, my characters they don't love me :(
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