This chapter is talking to ImaginaryStoryWriter and sonickirbypokemonfan :

Thank you so much. You're the first reviewers that I've seen that actually can respect another's opinion.

If everyone else would have reviewed like this, I would have apologized to them each individually.

I'll apologize to you both, and strictly only you two, because you both seem more reasonable.

What I said could have been delivered better and I knew it would offend many people. The main root reason why all of these things make me so angry is because of my personal experiences.

I love to read and write Kirby fanfiction. I have written Kirby fanfiction (theulti…).

It seems as if, when I spend weeks and months on a Kirby fanfiction that I just love to death. I can't wait to post it on the archive and I'm just thinking about how many people will love it. I spend so much time and put my blood sweat and tears into it. Analyzing each detail, making sure the mood and atmosphere of the story is how I want. Everything has to be PERFECT! AHHH! So then I am so proud of the work I have done and am so excited to post my new story on the archive.

Needless to say, I've gotten my hopes up. I end up posting the new story that I have literally slaved over and put so much work and thought into. Four weeks later: 2 reviews, 1 favorite…? My story gets buried!

It's kind of like doing a science fair project.

You spend five hours in this darn thing! You make sure every calculation and every experiment is done correctly. You analyze it and make sure there aren't any errors with any of the material. You then decorate it and put all of these nice pretty designs on it to make it appealing to the eye. You're now done with this project and it's the nicest project you've ever seen. You are so proud of yourself for making such a beautiful work of art.

The next day you bring it into school and look around at everyone else's projects. Wow! All of the other projects… don't quite look that… good. You're sure yours is definitely going to win!

You don't even place. Plus, the grade for the project is like a… 70?

Wow, I just love getting 70's on something I worked five hours on and made sure was correct.

This is what I'm dealing with right now, to the point where I'm not posting anything anymore. I don't see a reason why, it won't be read. Instead I see these other things that people don't put as much work into and I wish that I could get recognized for trying my hardest to make a story beautiful.

It makes me really disappointed and just, very let down. I'm getting a 70 on a science fair project. Why do I even try.

And strictly for you both, I apologize for the first chapter because those weren't even the real reasons I was mad. I don't hate OC's, like I said… I even have some of my own. Those things I said were just ranting and such.

I'm sorry for being analblasted but at least try and see this from my point of view.