Chapter 4: The great offence
Kirby was out for adventure. He brought his canteen, a bag to carry all his stuff, a very big hat, and vernaculars for his big trip. He was being a cool little dude until whoosh!!!!!!!!! Kirby had fallen into a huge hole and couldn't get back up. Kirby jumped and jumped but he couldn't up. So he had an idea his idea was hard though it was getting out the cave by defeating all the little monsters inside all the cave. So Kirby kept walking and said" This is more adventuress than I was going to go. Then he saw a monster it was way bigger than Kirby it was shaped like a tiki had a huge rock hand that could smash him. Kirby sucked up a beam out of no ware and turned it into his partner then sucked a jet and sucked it up and turned into it. The hand kept trying to smash Kirby. Kirby had to keep on dodging it. His partner attacked to his hand and it slightly almost dead but the Kirby by boosting Jet's jet pack then letting it go to hit the tiki then………. BOOOOOOOM !!! The tiki broke to pieces Kirby saw the Exit of the cave Kirby said that was very scary and fun at the same time. When he went home he took off everything and put away and went under an apple tree got an apple and ate it then fell asleep.
TO BE COUNTENUDED
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