Hello its me the author of this story, just wanted to tell u I stink at spelling and typing ! heres the review.
The guy points the gun at Rocky and then puts his finger on the trigger .Suddenly a thought flashes by Rocky and he remembers the worst day of his life. Rocky and his sister, Susan, were walking with there Mother when all of a sudden a man pops out of the bushes holding a long stick. Rocky's mother jumps on the man's leg and bites him. But, the man is not afraid! Instead of running, like most do, his points the stick at Rocky's mom's head , a bang is heard, and blood comes out of Rocky's mom's head .Rocky and Susan try to run, but the man is to close! He stomps his foot on Susan's tail as Rocky runs. When Rocky finally stops he looks back to see if his sister is alright, when he sees she is not there a shot is heard. Back in real life Rocky turns and runs from the man with the long stick, not wanting to die. When Rocky thinks his is a good distance away he stops "What are you doing at MY tree!"says a high pitched voice."Well,for one thing it's not YOUR tree ,it's the forest tree."says Rocky
Did Rocky make a friend or an Enmey read next time to find out. Until then bye from Yowazupeoples
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