(APOV)
Everything hurt. In my head I kept screaming; begging for it to stop, for someone to kill me. The pain had lasted long enough. Even my mind hurt. I felt like I was burning alive and someone was sticking heated metal rods into every spot on my body they could reach. It felt worse then death. For a while I thought that I had to be in Hell; there was no way pain like this could exist on Earth.
I didn't know how long I had been in pain when I felt a cold sensation on my neck. It was barely enough to squelch the fire burning inside of me but I could still feel it. Then it was gone. I just continued to scream. I didn't know what it was then I remembered the only thing in my mind besides screams: a feeling colder then ice on my neck and then, fire. Maybe whatever it was that had done this to me was back. Maybe they could make it stop. I tried to move but it was no use. Even so, the cold had only touched my neck briefly then was gone. Whatever had caused it was probably gone too. I had almost resigned myself to going back to my worthless screams when I felt more cold, behind my neck and under my knees, then against the side of my head. The fire was still the dominate of the feelings and after a few minutes the coldness seemed to fade; it barely felt like cold, just a fraction of less intense fire.
That cold only lasted a few minutes longer then left. I was starting to get frustrated. I just wanted all this pain and suffering to stop. I couldn't move anything. I couldn't open my eyes, and I could hardly think. I could only scream and even that was only thoughts. After a while, I stopped. It took too much energy and I realized it was no use.
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