A.N. hey everybody, i just wanted to say thank you all so much for the fantastic amount of reviews I've received, i don't think I've ever gotten this many before. However i would also like to say that if you don't like my stories then please tell me or don't read them. I made it perfectly clear in the summary that this was a girl on girl story so if you are not comfortable with those types of relationships then you had plenty of warning both there and in the trailer. No one is forced to read my stuff and it is your choice if you do. I do NOT appreciate homophobic reviewers writing to me and pretending to be fanfic bosses with the power to remove my story if i continue writing it, nor do i like being told i am writing in an inappropriate manner and that by making Miley and Lilly lesbians that i am lying and being malicious in the same review. As i said before, you are not forced to read my stuff, i write for the fun of it and as a stress reliever, like all writers on here i choose to give up my time to write these stories in the hopes that people will read and enjoy them and while i welcome criticism as it helps improve my writing i WILL NOT be threatened just because some people are not open to certain ideas.
To all of those of you who reviewed and added me to your alerts; once again thank you so much, it really does mean a lot to me and inspires me to keep writing. I hope you enjoy this next chapter. I know Lilly seems a little childish and a bit petty but she will have her serious moments as well and will probably become more serious as the story goes on but i just wanted a complete contrast to Miley for this first Lilly chapter. Just to show the differences between them... Lilly's character won't have that much detail at the moment because I'm still working out the kinks on what i want her to be like and her background info whereas Miley I've already got the main sketches for her character in my mind.
The song for this chapter is- girls just wanna have fun by Miley cyrus
Our lost summer chapter 2
Lilly groaned and slouched further into her seat as the captain's voice dully announced the planes descent into the scorching heat of Malibu's main airport for an excruciating two hour passenger pick up and refuel. she mimicked the preppy air hostess' voice as all passengers continuing on to Oregon were asked to remain on the plane at all times and not to leave their seats until the last new passengers were aboard and the aircraft was once again safely in the air and continuing on what was hoped to be a pleasant trip. When the plane finally made its way haltingly down the hazy, dust covered runway and back into the sticky looking bright blue sky Lilly let out a small sarcastic cheer; earning some vaguely amused and some downright uncomfortable looks from the other –stuffy upper class looking-passengers nearby. she merely shrugged, grinned and proceeded to repeatedly push the flashing orange light beside her to call the –all smiling, all the time, even when they want to scream- flight attendant for her fifth bag of "complimentary" peanuts and once again casually ask-while trying not to laugh- what exactly the plane's estimated trajectory and flight path were, how long- in minutes- the flight was scheduled to take and what were the average chances of the plane crashing while making its descent onto the runway in Oregon if they hit a: paper clip, rubber ball, car tyre or glass bottle along the way. She had gone through the exact same routine on the way to Malibu and had very nearly failed to keep a straight face as the air hostess had gone from first precise and helpful, then to slightly irked, to highly irritated, to completely livid.
While Lilly sat comfortably in her smooth white leather seat; sipping delicately on her no cinnamon, extra cream, double chocolate, triple sugar shot cappuccino- smirking up at her and trying to look innocent while knowing the attendant would happily explode and throw her from the plane if she was in the coach section of the plane but as it was wouldn't dare be anything but helpful and polite if she wanted to keep her job.
First class sure had its benefits. (Insert evil laugh/grin here)
The plane finally touched down in Oregon four cappuccino's, three bags of peanuts several bathroom breaks and a whole plane of irate cabin crew members later and Lilly immediately leapt to her feet and grabbed her hand luggage (skateboard)before racing towards the doorway which would lead her to freedom and launched herself through it- completely ignoring the disapproving glances and muttering being sent her way as she did so- but stopping short in amusement just a few steps from the bottom to watch as a girl -obviously as happy as she was that the flight had finally landed- decided to dance on the last step and promptly lost her footing and fell headfirst towards the ground.
Acting instinctively Lilly snaked her hand out and grabbed the girl around her tiny waist while the other grabbed hold of the back of her deep purple dress/top and slowly pulled her back upwards until they were both safely standing on the step- Lilly's arms still loosely circling the other girl. The brunette in her arms slowly turned around and Lilly could swear her heart stopped beating for a moment before it gave her a sharp kick in the gut and re-started at triple its normal pace; the girls breathtakingly gorgeous face was slightly flushed and her extraordinarily long curly brown hair was being tossed lightly around her head from the gentle breeze flowing across the runway while her delicate and flimsy looking purple wrap around top tightly hugged her top half and flared softly over her stomach, coming to rest mid thigh over a tight pair of plain black leggings which more than perfectly showed off her beautifully tanned legs.
So engrossed was she in admiring the girl in her arms Lilly failed to notice the brunette step away until she saw her teetering precariously on the edge of the steps again. She giggled at the sight but automatically reached out once more and grabbed hold of the thrashing girl, circling her arms around her once more before jumping lightly down the final step and onto the tarmac below and pulling the slightly shaking brunette to the side: partly because she wanted to avoid the still very brassed off looking troupe of air hostesses now emerging with their lethal looking hand luggage bags from the plane but mainly because she seemed to have the uncontrollable urge to keep the still flushed brunette in her arms for as long as possible (even if she didn't want to acknowledge why) and the best way to do that Lilly figured; was to talk to her.
"Boy, if i knew someone was that willing to fall for me I'd have come visit grandma a looong time ago"
A.N. so I've officially decided; i suck at chapter endings!! I think this one was just about as crummy as the last one.... honestly writers block is a b***h to get over, get it once and that's your writing totally screwed up.. or it is mine at least. I've also decided this is probably going to be a looooong story, at the moment it's looking to be about forty seven/ fifty two chapters but hopefully once i get into it it'll only be about twelve or so.... anyway, any suggestion on how i could make my endings of chapters better would be greatly appreciated because i think we're all agreed these last two have totally blowed and i really can't seem to find a way to fix them
Thanks for reading everyone... hope you like it despite the lame endings
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Becca
xoxox
