Okay guys-I got one review that said I should skip to the vision of Bella jumping. I really need everyone's opinion.
Here's my policy-if I read a story I review no matter what.
If you visit my story I need you to review. I need feedback. An author is nothing without reader's opinion!
I'll give you guys until Monday to vote by review-after that if I don't have any reviews, I'm stopping the story!