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Sup homie g's? (XD)? Well. Listen up everyone! I don't know how many of you read all the way to chapter 26/27, BUT THIS IS CHAPTER 28! WOO! WE'RE ALMOST TO THE END! *THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL DON'T WORRY!*
Also, in terms of important announcements, I'm going to stop pressuring people to review, but rather praise them when they do. So, simply review and I will mention your name in the RTRS. Want a story that isn't very popular mentioned in mine? Great. Just let me know, I can make add's pretty well; or so I'm told.
Also, DO NOT EXPECT CHAPTERS THIS MUCH BECAUSE I AM ON A LATE START SCHEDULE SO I HAVE MORE SPARE TIME!
Anywho, I am also creating a new version of my original one-shot Firestar's happily ever after; NOT!, so I hope everyone reads that. Also the allegiances say Ferncloud hasn't had her kits yet, but don't worry, she has.
RTRS:
none. Really? This is stupid. Jk.
COTC:
THIS FOLDER HAS NOT BEEN FILLED.
Recap: Snowflake and friends are about to wage war on Rainstar; prohpacy has it that they are going to win! Question is, how?
Thanks everyone for reading and have a great happy summer thing!XD
Chapter 28: The Great Battle (part 1)
Snowflake pricked her ears and listened. Soft murmurings were coming from outside the pile of rocks she and her family called home. She realized it was just her friends and family getting ready for battle. She padded out of the rock pile, and sat down next to Whitestorm.
"What's going on?"she whispered to him. There were alot of cats missing; Maybe some went hunting, but the others? Where could they have gone? Snowflake thought as she watched and listened.
"Some cats have gone out hunting; others are already going out to battle."Whitestorm replied, using the same quietness as Snowflake did.
"Why? I mean, there's not that many of us to begin with, and already Blazeheart's sent cats out there to fight? What is he thinking?"Snowflake spat.
"That's the same thing I thought, but then he told us that those cats are the ones who wanted to battle it out first."Whitestorm paused to glance at Blazeheart."His plan is to tire Rainstar's cats out with some of our own, and after we eat, we join the battle patrol."
"Oh. So there's only a certain number of cats gone?"Snowflake asked, her courage coming back to her.
Whitestorm nodded."Yep. I don't know who, though."he meowed uncertainly.
Snowflake opened her mouth to speak, but the hunting patrol had come back with prey. She padded away to look for Hawkfire. Where IS he? she thought in dismay as she couldn't find her mate.
Finally, Hawkfire appeared with a nice, juicy rabbit. Snowflake and Hawkfire sat down to eat the rabbit.
"Nervous?"Hawkfire asked between bites.
Snowflake shook her head."Never been more excited, though! I hope we can win,"she leaned down and took another swift bite.
"Me too."he meowed, and soon everyone was done eating their meals. Blazeheart leaped onto the highest rock in the rock pile, and mewed loudly,
"Now we move out! Let's go!"he yowled, and cats had no choice but to march down the grassy hill.
It was officially morning, because all the pretty sunrise colors had gone. The grass here was much shorter because they were getting close to the forest border. Blazeheart stopped his cats right before they crossed into the forest."Remember,"he meowed."No talking from here on out. We need to be focused in case we're ambushed."
Everyone either nodded or meowed 'Yes', and soon the cats were racing through the forest. No birds were chirping; it was as if they knew that a fierce deadly battle was underway. Or going to be.
Once the cats got to Rainstar's camp, they quickly got into a random battle position, and Blazeheart yowled,"Charge Forestclan! GO! GO! GO! GO!"he led his cats into battle.
Snowflake charged into the camp. She looked around for any cats that would be easy to take down. She spotted Brownfoot and charged straight towards him. He spotted her and yowled,"Snowpaw's here! Flameheart, get Lightfo-"she had tackled him with the force of an angry ocean.
"It's not Snowpaw anymore, it's Snowflake!"Snowflake hissed as she hit Brownfoot's chest. She unsheathed her claws and started clawing at his face madly. Browmfoot screeched in terror, and Snowflake had no idea he was talking, until she saw his jaw moving.
"Snow-flake, I'm sorry,"he mewed, choking out every word."I will fight-for-for you and-and Blazeheart,"
Snowflake narrowed her eyes."And why should I believe you after everything you ever did was for Flameheart and Rainstar?"
Brownfoot's eyes widened."I just-need to show you that-please, have mercy on me,"
"Why?"Snowflake crouched lower to his face.
"Just-let me show you-"Snowflake leaped off of the tom, but stayed crouching, ready in case he tried to attack her. Brownfoot got up and charged straight towards Creekwater, and then stopped. Snowflake was too far away to hear what they said, but she saw everything. Creekwater nodded, then smacked Brownfoot down."You can't just let her get away!"he roared, loud enough for Snowflake to hear."She's Flameheart's bitter and sworn enemy!"
Snowflake felt a twinge of pity for the tom. He just had to admit that he wants to fight for Flameheart's enemy, and now-heavy paws ramed into Snowflake. What the? She saw an orange tail, and bit down on it.
"That won't work on me, Snowflake!"Flameheart's mew sounded just above her head. He lashed at her face, Snowflake barely dodging."Creekwater! Brownfoot! Fetch Rainstar for this!"
"He's fighting Morningstar!"Creekwater replied, coming over to see Snowflake hopelessly pinned down by Flameheart.
"Then kill her. I'll just get started on ripping out her fur!"Flameheart called, then ripped out a shred on Snowflake's head. She spat and used all her strength to heave the tom off, but he was too heavy. Another patch of fur was ripped out, and Snowflake screeched in pain. She furiously dug her claws into the ground, but that did nothing. Yet another patch of fur was ripped off, and Snowflake screeched again.
"How DARE you hurt my daughter like that?"a mew so fierce stopped the battle and silenced the camp. Snowflake lifted her head to see a gray and white she-cat standing right over Flameheart.
"MOM!"she yowled. Instantly, she felt like she could fight a thousand warriors with only one paw. She heaved Flameheart off of her, and kicked his face.
"My daughter is NOT going to die at your paws!"Foreststar spat, swiping at Flameheart's nose, spattering blood everywhere."and she certainly won't die during this battle, either!"
Snowflake flung herself at Flameheart,"You lied to me! That's all you ever did was lie-"
"Snowflake, easy."she whipped around. Her mother was staring at her."No need for words. Just fight him. Let your blows come naturally." Snowflake nodded, and smacked his face.
She started clawing his side fiercely, and and was about to kill him by biting his neck, but Foreststar murmured,"No respectable warrior kills her opponent usually, but now you must; just remember in the future that that isn't always the way to win battles."
"Yes mother,"and Snowflake bit down on his neck; for once and for all. Many emotions started coursing through her body. She felt happiness, saddness, but most of all, it was what she didn't feel. I don't feel any regrets for taking this tom out. He deserved it, anyway. Snowflake thought once she finally released his neck.
Snowflake watched as her mother leaped and started to fight a big tawny and gray tom. Snowflake looked around the battle field. She suddenly saw a cat she could fight; a black tom with amber eyes. She charged straight towards the tom who was fighting Heatherpaw. Snowflake dug her claws into his back. The tom screeched and slashed at her face. Snowflake leaped back just in time, and then struck out with her forepaws. She caught a claw in his ear and wrenched it free. Where'd Heatherpaw go?
No sooner had Snowflake thought that did the golden tabby appear. She came down on the tom with such force Snowflake winced. The black tom reared up and was about to crush Heatherpaw, but Snowflake shoved her friend out of the way and got crushed herself. The black tom raked his claws down the she-cat's head. Snowflake screeched in pain.
"This...will...not...happen again!"Snowflake yowled in furry. She kicked the black tom in the stomach and stood back up. She nearly fell back down. My shoulder! Gosh, what did I do this time? she thought. Snowflake watched as the black tom came running for her. She remembered what Sweetwind had told her one day in training; if you ever get hurt in battle but you still are fighting, slash at their face; they'll never know what's coming. So as the tom bowled right into Snowflake, she tried to slap his face. It worked!
The tom spat in rage and backed up. Snowflake thought he was retreating, but she was wrong. The black tom jumped high into the air, leaping way over Snowflake.
"What was that?"she couldn't help asking.
"This is what it is!"the tom spat as he hurled himself into the air again. This time he flipped and landed right on top of her. Snowflake gasped. Her shoulder seemed to be in an even worse state.
"Now you know what I was doing;"he hissed into her ear."Maybe next time you can beat me. Oh wait; only there won't be a next time!"
"You're right,"Snowflake growled."There won't"she felt strength return into her bones, and most of all, her shoulder. She stood up, throwing the tom off. She tackled him easily and grappled for his neck. Finally, she grabbed it and bit down hard. The tom screeched in furry, but nothing else happened. He simply fell over and died.
Before Snowflake even released his neck, another cat rammed into her. By the smell of it, it was Sunfall."Told you I would return,"he growled in happy rage.
Woah! Snowflake has to kill one of her former clanmates; will she have the strength to do so?
Find out in next week's chapter!
Or tomorrow's.
Love y'all!
~Night
