Just a quick author's note. I'll be updating in a few days, but I wanted to thank nomad20 for some useful criticism. I, myself, felt like I was rushing a bit. I just have so many ideas that I want to write. I take constructive criticism quite well and if you feel like there's something in the story that I need to change or enhance, please share your thoughts. Anything that improves me as a writer. I'm also open to new ideas for the story. Remember, I am new at this. So thanks for the reviews! Hope you all enjoy the story. -Crazmofo