Hallo Again!

Ok, I got this one review saying what i've done wrong and how I could imporved and I just wanted to say THANK YOU SO MUCH!

To be honest, I just got lazy most of the time, and some chapters were written so late at night I made them too fast so I could finish and go to bed =]

I have TRIED to put more description in and correct my grammar, but I'm terrible at grammar so please forgive me, also I over used the commer...I apologize.

I can only upload every two days or something because I'm very busy with GCSE's and stuff, so...SORRY!

Anyway yeah, I'm going to try and do quality control and such from now on. SO please tell me whats bad in the nicest way possible, of course you can just say its good and make me all warm and fuzzy inside =D

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Ichigo searched and searched for his counter partner in the horizontal mess of a world that he called his mind; he needed to let off some steam and usually Hichigo was always asking for a fight, but today he was no where in sight.

Suddenly Zangetsu appeared behind the orange haired strawberry, his cape flapping in the none-existant wind and standing upon his beating stick, his sunglasses adding to his 'coolness'.

Ichigo did wonder what Zangetsu did in his spare time…

"If you're looking for Hichigo he is in hiding."

Ichigo stared at the unstylish mad man on a stick

"Hiding?" As far as he knew, Hichigo was the one searching for the hider, not the other way round.

Ichigo's fiery eyes scanned his world for any sign of his 'hiding' punch bag; all he saw was blue and clouds.

"Yes…I saw it happen…I believe he had been; what people in your world call, sexually assaulted?" Zangetsu tried to remember the word correctly.

Ichigo could have laughed, Hichigo? Assaulted? What a joke!

He shook his head and carried on searching for his white haired almost-twin, but still, no matter where he looked, the white boy was no where to be found…that was until Ichigo stumbled across him on the top of the highest building inside his mind, which also happened to be the hardest to scale.

The carrot top hauled him self up and landed silently behind his fearsome hollow. When the other made no move to indicate that Ichigo's existence was realized, Ichigo coughed loudly.

Hichigo jumped up at his presence and seemed to flinch at any movement. His gold eyes darted to Ichigo and then to his surroundings; his body was rigid, nothing like his usual stances.

Ichigo looked at him warily, causing him to tighten his grip on the white sword by his hip and stared at Ichigo wide eyed.

Was Hichigo…trembling?!

Seeing Hichigo in such a sorry state infuriated the half shinigami and so he attacked him out of no where, earning a frightened, startled yelp from Hichigo's silent lips, there was DEFIANTLY something wrong!

"What's eating you?!" Ichigo swung one attack after the other, and for once Hichigo only dodged; with no attack of his own to retaliate.

"Stop running away you coward!" Ichigo chased him; he was getting on his nerves now, but the hollow ignored him and actually turned his back and ran, leaping so far he was only a spec at the edge of Ichigo's mind within a few seconds. Ichigo stopped and sent mind daggers through glaring to his cowardly hollow.

Zangetsu appeared behind Ichigo causing the scowling spirit boy to have a spasm.

"Don't sneak up on me!" Ichigo tried to take a swing at the abnormally strong, thin stick that supported the old man, however it somehow dodged without moving an inch.

Zangetsu ignored him. "I think he may be traumatized…" Such wise words for a man who doesn't like conversation.

Ichigo looked up at him skeptically. "What? You couldn't have been serious about before!" Ichigo refused to believe it.

The man with stubble and funky sunglasses nodded.

"I was. He was assaulted by a female hollow with blue hair and green eyes. She said she was a kitty."

Ichigo found the word 'kitty' hilarious coming from Zangetsu's mouth, he ruffled his orange hair, staring at the tiny spec in the distance that was Hichigo, he'd have to snap some sense into his hollow; he needed him for power!

Ichigo rubbed his chin in thought, he should start shaving soon, he felt a little stubble coming through and he didn't want to look like Zangetsu or his dad!

"Perhaps if this 'kitty' person apologized…" Zangetsu was mumbling away on his abnormally long and thin stick again.

At this point Zangetsu wouldn't stop talking to himself so Ichigo shook himself back to the real world.

Hum, ok, I just read through it and it's mostly dialogue buuuut I'm too stressed to add more stuff than I already have, so please uses your own imaginations or something...I know, I'm lazy.