Hey everyone welcome to performer 2 in this ongoing poetry slam enjoy remember R&R flames will be eaten by trogdor which i will borrow from Strong bad. OH! and please remember characters/and plot bunny's belong to me. ask for usage please

Nothing loyal about loyalty

Never dying, never ending

This choking feeling of your love.

You say you love me, you say you hate me,

But you will never let me go.

With all the power in your hand

You use me for every little command.

But when I plea for my life,

Your hand is like a knife.

Forgive me oh great one, forgive me my love!

Please don't kill me; I'm sorry, I'm sorry.

With this final cry I kiss you good bye.

No more pain I say and I end it that night.

Forgive me forever, forgive me for now.

Forgive myself for letting you down

another one bites the dust!w

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