I would greatly appreciate any feedback you have to give because I am sort of a beginner XD
It had been a moon since her naming ceremony and she still hadn't received an omen from star clan. Amberfur was nervous but she quickly pushed the thought aside and smiled. Today would be as good a day as ever. She arched her back and yawned before sitting down for a quick wash.
As she groomed herself she ran a list of herbs she needed. When she finished she stretched again and walked out of her den. "Good morning Amberfur" Panthereye said to her and waved his long tail at her as he walked across the clearing with prey in his jaws and dropped it at her feet. "Good morning to you to Panthereye" she said warmly, "Duskflower will appreciate it."
He flashed a smile at her quickly before scampering out of the clearing for a hunting patrol. Leaf-bare had come without a warning and none of the clans had been prepared but Thunderclan had quickly adjusted and was now back on track.
Amberfur quickly gulped down her thrush and waited for her mentor to wake up. As she sat a single snowflake landed on her nose. Instead of stinging slightly and melting it burned as words went through her head. "Snow can burn just as badly as fire…" and then the feeling was gone.
She swiped her tongue around her muzzle and sucked in a shaky breath, what did it mean? She was still pondering this when Duskflower exited the den. "You look scared Amberfur, what is it?" she asked. Amberfur turned to her mentor and told her what had happened. "I see, all we can do is wait and watch" Duskflower said and bent down her head to eat the vole that Panthereye brought.
Amberfur nodded at her words but still, the more she thought about it the more ominous it seemed. She was shook out of these thoughts when Eagleclaw bounded in. "Larksong is having my kits!" he yowled giddily then stopped. "Is there anything I can do to help her?" the young warrior asked and looked at Amberfur uneasily.
"Just be there for her and the kits, it's the best you can do" Amberfur said calmly. "I'm guessing you want me to tell that to Shadowleaf to because Owlfeather has just moved into the nursery." Eagleclaw said and looked at her. "Yes, yes tell him to" Amberfur sighed.
"Sometimes I feel like they are all bumbling kits and I am their mother" Amberfur muttered half-heartedly. Duskflower laughed and flicked her former apprentice's ear with her tail. "Give them time, they get better" she purred. Amberfur purred back at her former mentor and smiled. "Thank you Duskflower" she said and laughed when she heard Swiftstorm call her name irritably.
"Go on," Duskflower purred sympathetically, "you know he won't stand there forever." Amberfur dipped her head then ran out to meet Swiftstorm. "My paws are cracked!" he growled grumpily. "Let me look at them" Amberfur said. "I think I know when my paws are cracked!" he snarled. "I'm just making sure no infection has set in" she replied. When she had thoroughly assed his paws she went back into her den to look for the right herb.
When she found it she quickly grabbed what she needed and headed back out to Swiftstorm. She chewed up the leaves of a coltsfoot plant and applied it to Swiftstorm's paws. "Thank you Amberfur, now if you don't mind I'm going back to guard duty" he said and was off in a huff. Amberfur rolled her eyes behind his back and chuckled.
The day went quite well and at the end of the day she was exhausted. Amberfur sunk gratefully into her nest beside Duskflower and slipped into an uneasy sleep. She was pulled into a dream that made no sense. She was in the middle of a dark forest as voices rang through her head. It took a while for her to realize what they were saying but gasped in shock when she heard. "Snow can burn just as badly as fire…"
Ok so this is where I take requests, First come first serve. I need names and appearances for three kits, one tom and two she-cats. You can do all three or just one, it doesn't matter. I will report how many kits are left at the end of each chapter if any. I'm not trying to sound rude i just want to be efficient.