A New Addition

by Procyon's Tears

The water surged even more as the pressure from the unclosed pipe released the pent up energy. Kim felt her knees buckle and she sank against the wall, but she kept her hands open, willing the water to stay on its course. She felt exhilarated and terrified all at the same time. Brianna's hand clamped on her shoulder and she screamed painfully in Kim's ear. Kim! Are you alright?

9. Update!

Hey readers!

Whew. I've been working super hard and diligently rewriting a majority of my chapters.

That's right. Rewriting.

So...before I update you with a new one, I suggest you go back and reread chapters 2 - 6, respectively. Trust me. You will want to do this. I've added some more important detail and just fixed up some spelling errors, grammatical errors, and plot errors overall. The plot hasn't changed too much, but it has a much more solid base. Something that I am now pleased to work with.

Review again! Let me know what you think!

Because I'm putting my foot down. ;) No more new chapters until I get some opinions on the ones I redid!

I seriously need this feed back ladies and gents. ;) I want to know what you think! Really! This is the time where you CAN speak up and you CAN put your opinion out there!

Thanks guys. :D You are all awesome for following me through, thick and thin!

I hope to see some feedback soon!

Aloha!

Merlin