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"Mew Mew Negi-" before I could finish the phrase, Katsuro teleported behind me, grabbed my waist and the air around me started feel lighter and compress. When it went back to normal, we were in some strange dark place. We were standing on a platform of rock and the sky was a dark swirly purple.
"I'm not really sure how strong you are, so I'll test you out" he said flying infront of me. He then summoned his weapon, which was four sharp, hooked pieces of metal attached together with a handle. I recognized it as a claw.
"Go ahead. Transform" he ordered with a predatory smirk.
No need to tell me!
"Mew Mew Negi Onion! METAMORPHO-SIS!"
I glowed blue and transformed. Katsuro smiled and brought his claw back and then flicked it forward. Lightning wnet shooting out of it. I jumped out of the way, and the lightning collided with the ground that I was just standing on.
"Negi Onion Electric!" I summoned my guitar.
Katsuro came flying down and slashed at me with his claw.I blocked it with my guitar then swung at him with it, he dodged out of the way then fired more electricity at me. I wasn't fast enough to ge completely out of the way, the shock of it sent me flying. I spun in the air and managed to land on my feet. I barely had ant time to recover before he attacked again. I bloked it, then attacked.
"Negi Onion Jam!"
He blocked the attack but was pushed back alittle. He then teleported. I heard it open up behind me, and tried to jump out of the way, but I was too slow. His claw slashed at my back, but it got slightly stuck in my hair and the cut it left in my back wasn't too deep, he quickly cut through it. I was actually glad I let my hair grow out, if I hadn't, I would have been dead. I used that slight hesitation to my advantage, and spun around, whacking the side of his face with my guitar. I heard a cracking sound and he stumbled back. He opened his mouth and spat out some blood, and a white fang. I got revenge for him ruining my hair at least.
"Well, you may not have much speed, but you have brute strength"
I noticed he made a weird whistling sound, I couldn't help but laugh.
"Stop laughing!" he whistled.
I laughed even harder. He rushed at me slashing with his claw. I raised my guitar against the attack. I was pushed back from the force. Wow he's strong. He conitued slashing away at me while I contiued being pushed back. I looked behind me and saw I was getting closer to the edge of the floating chunk of dirt. I had to do something before he pushed me off the edge. I contiued blocking his powerful slashes, and being pushed closer to the edge, and trying to figure out what to do when I found my heels hanging of the edge. One more slash would put me over. While Katsure brought his claw down, I forced my guitar towards it. When they hit, I jumped to the side and spun so I was still facing him. That threw him off balance and he stumbled a little but he didn't fall over the edge. He looked behind him at the swirling purple clouds and mumbled something. He looked at me and smiled. Though, his smile was quite creepy.
"OK, Negi-Chan, I think your strong enough"
Negi-Chan!? When did this creep decide he could call me Negi-CHAN?!
"No way bastard!"
I then slammed a chord on my guitar sending out a sound wave. He raised his claw agaisnst the attack and snarled.
"Fine! After I give you a chance to live!" He flew towards me and brought his claw down towards my head. I closed my eyes and raised my guitar and blocked it. I heard the sound of metal screeching against metal, and a snap. I jumped back instinctively and opened my eyes. In each hand, I was holding a part of my broken guitar. It then shattered and dissolved into blue sparkles. My stomach turned and I felt like I was going to puke. How the hell would I survive against this guy?! He came at my again and slashed towards me. I jumped to the side but his arm still got my ribs, I heard a crack and Iwas sent flying. I slid into the ground on my back and whimpered. Tears tried to leave my eyes. I fought them back. I didn't want this bastard to see me crying. I was terrified I felt sick, and it felt like a knif was going through my rib. I thought I was going to die for sure.
"Ribbon… Zakuro Spear!"
I slowly lifted my head and saw a purple light slashing through the dark purple and black. Then I saw Zakuro standing in a rip in the dimension with her hair waving around her. Katsuro turned and glared at her. Zakuro jumped through the rip to stand on the ground. She unleashed her whip and slashed at Katsuro. He dodged and teleported away. After that, I passed out.
I have never broken a bone so I don't know if that description of Negi's rib was accurate… Well anyways I'd like to tell you people that we're getting real close to the end. Maybe one more chapter left. And I'll probably write a sequel. Unless people think I should clump the ideas for the sequel with this story and forget the sequel. Well please review!