Hello, everyone, Daisy here.
Skimming through the story here.
Let's be straight here- it's not the best, but... It has potential, correct? And maybe some okay storylines?
Shall I rewrite it, maybe?

Hello, everyone, Daisy here.
Skimming through the story here.
Let's be straight here- it's not the best, but... It has potential, correct? And maybe some okay storylines?
Shall I rewrite it, maybe?
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