Thank you, cnp97 for the first review on chapter 2!
And you have disabled PMs, so I'll reply right here.
Cnp97: Thank you, here's the next chapter! :] I often forget that too. She seems so old *wipes away imaginary tear* she's growing up! Haha. I seem to forget it more on fanfiction because she's generally portrayed as older and more devious. That's not necessarily a bad thing, just different. Makes me forget.
Now, onto the next chapter!
Disclaimer: I don't own…
They were making me wear a dress. I couldn't believe it. Apparently, this dinner was really fancy, meaning a dress AND heels. I could barely walk in the things, let alone run, fight or take off. This was an issue.
"Max, you look soooo pretty!" Ella gushed, pulling on a single ringlet of hair that was purposely left out of the elaborate up-do they had twisted my brown locks into. This was mainly accomplished by Ella and Nudge, though Angel was present and mom helped a little. Ella and my mom had been off doing CSM-ish things this afternoon, and therefore were not present during our trip to the Boston Museum of Science and to the Aquarium. (AN: THANKS EVERYONE! I know I'm an idiot. Hah :).)
We had met up at a nearby outdoor shopping center and mom had then broken the news to me: I was going to have to wear a dress. So they spent the next hour having me try on dresses and shoes, ooh-ing and ah-ing at each one. The boys had luckily escaped this torture, and were probably in Brookstone relaxing in the massage chairs.
They finally found a strapless red dress and bought black heels to match. Then they dragged me back to the hotel room (we picked up the boys along the way. I was right; they had been hanging out in Brookstone). They then spent another hour making sure I looked perfect, though why I needed to I had no idea.
The bathroom door clicked open and I tried to stand up to see who had entered. Keyword being tried. I toppled over as soon as my three inch heels hit the ground. Luckily, whoever had just enetered managed to catch me before I ended up on the ground with a bruised tail bone and a hurt ego.
"Thanks Fang," I said, as Fang, AKA the person who had just walked into the bathroom, helped me back to my feet.
"I have to talk to you for a minute…" He said quietly, nodding to the door. I wobbled forward in my heels and he followed, shutting the door behind him and leaning against it.
"I just wanted to say… you look… gorgeous," he said softly, looking at me through his soft black hair with his beautiful chocolatey eyes… No! Bad Max! Don't think like that!
Told ya so. The voice had to add it's input right there.
Shut up voice.
"You had to bring me out here to tell me that?" I asked, looking up at him.
"No, I brought you out here so I could do this," he swooped lower and kissed me lightly on the lips.
"Now I have to go get ready," he smiled at me. "See you later,"
Husband… Wife…
Okay, the story's moving fast. The next chapter is the dinner cruise already!
Whatever, I'm having fun. Hope everyone's enjoying it.
Sorry the chapters are getting shorter and shorter. I'll try to make the next one longer. I have a half a page done already.
I'm aiming for one or two more chapters, but it could easily be more. I don't really know, I'm playing this by ear.
Now I'm gonna go get ice cream and study for my science final. If I fail, I blame fanfiction.