OML I know this is nothing to do with my story, btw I am trying to get the next chapter up but I have writers block and any idea will be gladly welcomed. Anyway, there is this person called, Worldmaker, who made him judge, jury and executioner. I didn't make him read my story, he chose to, nobody had a gun to his head and said read it or you will die. Basically in his first review this is what he said.
Just once I'd love to see a story in which Ron is happy that Harry and his sister got together, instead of the same old cliched crap about him going ballistic because someone dared express interest in her.
Seriously, hasn't this sort of ** been done about a million times all ready?
Fair enough if he didn't like it but he could have either wrote nothing, or something constructive. And this is what I got back after I told him that
Subject: No reviews, just butt-kissery
I'm sorry, but "your story is
cliche ridden and trite; the plot has been
done, and done better,
a thousand times before" is constructive criticism.
What you
mean when you say that is "I don't want reviews... I want my
butt
kissed". I don't do butt-kissery. If you can't handle
honesty, don't write.
Its not my fault you're not a very good
writer.
What type of a prick says that to someone, I have never claimed to be a good writer? And I want reviews but I just have to say: If you don't have anything nice to say don't say it. That's not meaning I don't like criticism because I really do try and take that on board when I'm writing but there is no need to be a dick about it is there.
Arghhhh now my little rant is over I can get back to trying to get on with this story. Any idea will be gladly appreciated
Love Jessca x