A/N: I wrote Bad Luck Bree: The Girl on the Flying Dutchman when I was fifteen. Now I'm eighteen, and both my writing ability and my story-weaving ability have grown (as well as my vocabulary!) The story of Bad Luck Bree and Davy Jones is close to my heart (since I'm such a huge Davy Jones fan girl, and it was the first and so far the only fan fiction I've ever completed) and I've read over it several times. And lemme tell ya, I cringe every time. There are certain parts where I'm thinking 'PLOT HOLE!' or 'CHEESE!' or 'WHAT?!' I got a lot of really positive reviews from everyone, and lots of people really like Bree and her story as well as my writing style (btw, thank you so much for all your support and reviews! I love all of you guys!) and was told that I kept all of the canon characters like Jack, Bootstrap and Jones very in character and kept Bree from becoming a Mary Sue. I'll risk being considered vain and agree with this to an extent. I think I kept the canon characters MOSTLY in character (lots of pondering on their personalities and accents like Davy's and Jack's; JACK'S ACCENT IS NEVER COCKNEY, SO WHY DID I WRITE IT THAT WAY?!) and I think I kept Bree from being TOO unrealistic. Bree has still been very active in my brain over the last three years. Because of this, her history, her personality have developed and changed. Bree has changed. So I'm going to rewrite Bad Luck Bree: The Girl on the Flying Dutchman. I don't plan on changing any elements of the story plot wise (except fixing some inconsitencies, cutting out any cheesy bits, maybe actually getting the heart thing right this time, and adding a few little things) but I'm planning to simply improve this story. I'm keeping the old story up of course, though I'll probably be using passages from it verbatim (mostly dialogue and angst scenes, 'cause all of those were pretty good in my opinion). Hope y'all like it as much as ye liked the other one!
So go check out Bad Luck Bree REMASTERED and tell me what ye think!!