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Chapter 7: I am a true immortal!


The entire Akatsuki was jumping from tree branch to tree branch at break neck speed. They had just met with Pein's spy. He had told them that the woman was 20 miles north of where they were. He also told them that she may be alone but still very dangerous.

It was oddly silent between the Akatsuki. If it had been any other situation they would have been at each others throats. Though there still was a few problems. Like that fact that Deidara didn't stop glaring at Itachi and Hidan cursed or swore just about every five seconds for no reason at all.

They were near their targets location. They felt a massive chakra signature. A chakra signature that dwarfed Kisame's.

"Dang" Hidan cursed, "She has as much chakra as a biju."

Kisame and Deidara nodded their heads in agreement.

"We need a plan before we go any further." Kakuzu glanced at the others. Kisame grinned.

"Well what do you suggest Kakuzu-san?" The shark man asked.

"We'll do something between a charge and ambush." He continued explaining his plan. The others paid abrupt attention, except for Hidan. And when Kakuzu said to get ready the jashinsit asked if he could repeat the plan for he wasn't listening. Let's just say that the first injury of the battle was dealt.


A sole woman stood at the center of a large clearing. She had cleared it specifically for her next fight.

Valencia smirked. She knew of her "guests" that has come to visit her. She could sense their chakra presence as if they were standing right next to her. With amusement in her vivid green eyes she followed their movements. They had split into two groups. Three, one of which had at least three times more chakra then the rest of them ran straight towards her. The other three split up even more and flanked her. She guessed that they were going to use brute force to push her towards their waiting allies. A charge and ambush all rolled up into one.

"I'll go along with their little plan." She said quietly to herself. "Just to see their expressions when they see a true immortal."

She didn't have to wait long. Three males jumped out of the trees and stopped at the far end of the clearing. They all wore the same black cloaks but she could still distinguish certain characteristics they had. One wore a mask that covered his entire face. The second was pale with white hair and lavender eyes. Valencia couldn't help but ogle at him for a moment. She looked away from him and almost laughed out loud at the third. He was tall and…. Had spiky blue hair that defied gravity and light blue skin with gills and small beady eyes.

"So tell me. Is that carrot head really your leader?" She called to them. They gave no reply. "Now, now." She teased. "Don't you know it's rude to ignore a lady?" 'I'll give them a little scare for being such uncivilized criminals' she thought wickedly. She took too unusually slow, long strides forward then a monstrous booming filled the entire area as she ran faster than the speed of sound. A gust of wind blew fierily at the three Akatsuki. It blew so harshly that they had to anchor themselves to the ground with chakra to stop from being blown away by it.

"Didn't your mother teach you any manners?" She whispered into the white haired mans ear. All of their eyes widened as she smirked wolfishly. "I hope you guys give me a challenge like that carrot head did."


Hidan, Kakuzu and Kisame were all panting from breath. The same though on all of their minds.

'This woman is on a whole different level then us'

They charged her once again. All she did was doge. She never attacked even though she had plenty of chances to do so. Every single movement was planed and flowed perfectly into the next. No step or jump out of place. She bent, twisted and sanped her body into complex and fluid maneuvers. She was faster than the wind. Smoother than water. Not a single drop of sweat formed on her body. She breathed normally as they struggled to breath. Somehow they were slowly pushing her back towards the others. If they could reach them then they could rest to catch their breath. If they had stopped their attack for more than a second she would charge at them her fist pulled back.

They were almost there. They just needed to reach the end of the clearing and the others can take over. They were 20 feet away. Their attacks became quicker as if in anticipation. 15 feet. She seemed to sense the adrenaline rushing through their veins. The climax was approaching. 10 feet. A bush hiding halfway behind a tree shifted slightly. 5 feet. A grey blob shot out from behind the bush. And she reached the end of the clearing. Hidan, Kakuzu and Kisame ran Pell-mell in the opposite direction. A clay centipede charged out from the forest, wrapping itself securely around Valencia. They didn't see the look of pure joy on her face.

BOOM! Deidara's clay bomb exploded with destructive furry. The entire area when the woman was once standing had burnt everything to a crisp within a 30 meter radius. Deidara, Sasori and Itachi jumped into the clearing. Deidara looked smug.

"Took you guys long enough." He smirked. Hidan wanted to curse the blonde's ear off but instead he fell on his knees panting. Kisame and Kakuzu looked as if they were going to do the same.

"That was too easy" Kakuzu grumbled. This was the woman that gave their leader near fatal injuries. There was no way on earth that they could have taken her so easily.

"And your right."

Everyone started disbelievingly where the woman once stood. A light green light built its way up from the ground swirling in tight circles. Two feet formed from the light then legs, a lower body, an upper body, two arms and finally a head with long hair. The light faded and Valencia stood before them smiling warmly.

"Tell me." She asked them. "How does it feel to face a true immortal?"

"Feels like (bleep) if you ask me." Hidan remarked. The woman's smiled disappeared.

"I'm board of this game now." She said blankly. "I'll just end this once and for all." She took two long strides and another loud boom! Filled the clearing. First she appeared behind Deidara.

"I think that a case of slack jaw will take care of those 4 mouths of yours." The tips of her index finger grazed Deidara's face. Almost immediately all of his jaws clamped in place. He couldn't move any of his mouths.

'How the heck did she know?' He screamed mentally. He was hidden the entire time. There's no way she knew about the mouths on his hands.

Her next target was Kakuzu. Her fingers barely touched his steel hard skin when his body changed and was no longer hard. "Impressive, being able to control the carbon in your skin to make it harder than diamond." She touched him again and his whole body stiffened. She did like wise for Kisame.

She paused when she appeared behind Sasori. The puppet grabbed her hand when she touched his skin. Her eyes flashed for a fraction of a second. Rage dominated her facial features. "A living puppet." She spat. She pulled him towards her and placed her hand on his heart. Sasori hissed in pain and fell to the ground.

"Dang it!" Hidan cursed again. He and Itachi were the last ones standing.

She scowled staring into Itachi's now red eyes. "Crap" she hissed. She was especially susceptible to any kind of jutsu and if he was any smart then he would figure out her secret. With frightening speed she disappeared and reappeared a fraction of a second later in front of Itachi. Her hand covering his eyes.

"Tsk, tsk boy." She cooed. "Don't you know how to take care of your eyes? Soon your eye sight will be completely gone." She grinned sadistically. "Let me speed up the process for you."

Itachi gasped in surprised as everything went black. He wanted to cry out in pain when his body froze up and her fell to the ground but couldn't. His mouth wouldn't work.

"And one little monkey jumping on the bed." She sang in a sing song voice. She walked slowly towards Hidan. The priest cursed. He was still too tired from the fight before.

With slow deliberation she placed her hand on his forehead. "Well, well. If it isn't a fellow immortal." She whispered. "But you are not a self crated immortal like me. Your immortality is dependant of sacrifices made to your "deity" "

"You know about jashin?" Hidan wheezed.

"Of course. The great, great grand child of a good old friend started the cult." She laughed the expression on his face was priceless. It was a cross between flabbergasted and dumbfound.

"You all should have stayed in your villages. The real world can be so scary sometimes." Blood spurted from Hidan's mouth as he fell unconscious.

"The real world is truly indeed scary. That is why I intend to fix it." Valencia whispered.


Is this the end of our beloved Akatsuki? How far dose Valencia's powers extend?


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